Oh that's mean throwing Danny right in the deep end of superhero game. Fights, lies and constantly short of sleep.

Once again it was a really good fight scene but I especially loved the bathroom bit. Fun tricks with invisability.

Good luck on the next chapter.

Poor, poor Danny, he has it all in front of him.

Loved the fight scene in the basement some of your best work yet.

YAY! That was absolutly GREAT! I loved it! KEEP IT ON BABY! xD

YAY xD Just a tip for next time ; LONGER CHAPPIES! Then we won't just say ''update'' all the time :3 WE WANT ACTION! XD

That's really cool using Danny as your manager. The more he bullies you into finishing the more you can get your back by thinking up truely nasty things to happen to him in the stories.

Looking forward to more, bring on Plasmius!

Creepiness is rising! But what do you mean by curved shoes? Like something from the arabien nights with pointed toes?

Good atmosphere, very spooky. I have a feeling that Danny is going to get a 'mysterious offer' from this stranger soon.

all i know is that it was not me, because i am sitting in my cahri. xD please hurry and update!! wonder what's on danny's mind... hm... a good mystery, i like it. xD

Your dialoge's really good. Especially Tucker's bits I feel that way about my laptop sometimes.

Looking forward to seeing what you do with this. Are you sticking to the 'offical' version or are you planing to take the story off in a new direction?

Good luck with the endeavour.