Great chapter!! I thought that these two lines were really funny:

“No “hello Tiff, how you doing girl” Dom you really must be grumpy that you have to see Dom again” she said trying and somebody possibly Jesse started laughing.

“Tell Jesse to shut the ** up and I haven’t thought about seeing hi again”

I liked it that Tiff sent Gustavo to pick them up, and then she always planned it out so that Dom was there too.Ooh I knew that Letty was going to be ** off at Dom when they finally got to talk face to face. I hopope that Dom and Letty can work it out! Well great chapter and please do post more soon!! :)

Great chapter!!Lol with Letty when she is thinking back to when that guy gave her the number and then she was thinking how she was wrong about never needing it.Also haha at LEtty's comment:

Wow I just told these guys they could die and they cheered well maybe they weren’t scared of dying.

Ooh and I liked it that you had Letty rethink about what happened when Fenix shot her.

It does suck though thtat you only have 2 (i think) more chapters up atm. But great chapter and i cant wait to read the next one!! :)

Great chapter!! Also wow Tran and Verone?! But on a better note. Yeah Letty is alive!! I was wondering when you were going to talk about her more! I'm glad that you made her alive though. Also I'm glad that Vince and Leon are also in it now. Ooh and I really thought that this was funny:

“Yes Dom, I’m alive” She said looking at Dom. “Actually Letty is dead she was shot. My name is Michelle Letha Rodriguez, but everybody call me Let.” She said with a straight face and Leon started laughing.

“Leon you’re the only one that still laughs” said Tiff while Letty and Vince smacked the back of Leon’s head.

Also I love it when Mia keeps laughing. Then when she says that Dom cried for her! :) Oh and haha when everyone starts laughing at Dom and saying when the last time he cried was.lol.Also lol when Mia gets mad at Brian for not telling her that Letty was alive.Great chapter and i cant wait to see what will happen in the next one! :)

Great chapter!! lol I love it how Rico got shot and Tego is still laughing at him about it.lol. Also I really liked the story that Rome told about Brian lool. Funny times.Oh and I really liked this line from Rome:

“Mia you out of food” I said because the bag was empty.

Of course he is hungry. He's always hungry. And then when Tej is like no you ate it all Rome. Also Jesse!! Yeah you didn't make him die. I'm glad about that!!Also lol when the guy calls Rome, Roma, the capital of Italy.lol.Also ooh wow I thought that Tiff was going to shot Tego at the end of the chapter. Well I can't wait to see what you have planned out for the next chapter!! :)

Great chapter!! Also hmm I had a feeling that something was going to go wrong on their plan to get to the warehouse.Also ooh Braga and Verone are back into!! Wait I thought that Rome said that he killed Verone in the first or second chapter?! Well great chapter and i cant wait to read the next chapter!!

Great chapter!! I really liked these lines:

“Mia, please slow down” Dom said as he put his seatbelt on. “No Dom I’m bored” I said as the van redlined and I shifted onto second doing at least 80.

lool.I love it how much Dom kept freaking out when Mia was driving.lol.

Also way to leave it at a cliff hanger! I wonder who got hit, and who did the shooting! I cant wait to read the next chapter to see who it was!

Great chapter!! I liked the flashback in the begining on what happened after Fenix died. Since they didn't show that in the movie. Also lol at Brian when he yells at the paramedic, because he touched him in his ribs. Also I really like it how when Mia starts getting mad she refeers to is as her Letty side coming out.I really liked the flashback that Mia had on how she got the name of having Letty's side.Ooh and I like it how you showed how Tego got there at the end to get Dom out too.lol at Mia when her Letty side comes out again when she sees Brian sister on hsi lap.I also really liked this line:

“Be nice to your sister, Brian” yelled Mia from the kitchen as if she knew that he was laughing at me. “You’re on a leash, Brian, aren’t you?” I said as he instantly shut his mouth when Mia talked. “Continue on” he said through gritted teeth.

Ooh I also liked it that you are adding Tej and Suki into it too.Great chaoter! and i cant wait to read the next one!! :)

Great chapter!! I really liked it!! Also I liked it that when Brian and Mia and all of them came to break Dom outta the bus. That Rome was there, and they also got him off the buss too. I really liked Rome so I'm glad that you added him to the story! lol with Dom when he is like I guess the car is really cursed.lol.Also I really liked this line:

“He owes me another car” I said as I started to walk slowly to the car and see a black guy with cornrows and a Japanese looking girl run towards it.

I can't wait to read the next chapter!! :)

Nice action in this chapter. I like how you've got the girls shooting at the cars. Also, I'm really interested to see how the conversation between Letty and Dom ends. I thought Brian and Mia's conversation about commando was really funny. Great work. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Starting school always sucked but good luck...AJ

Super, please update soon
-bella

Great update and I loved it. I am glad they are all back together and I hope Dom and Letty will work things out. Keep up the great writing and please post more soon.
Tanya

i like it! i hope you update soon!

This is a really good story, and its ok we all get a case of writter block at one point
-bella

This was a funny chapter. I have been out of for a while and was excited to see that you've updated. I can't wait t see what happens when Letty sees Dom again. I am glad that Brian and Mia are patching things up. Keep up the great work. Can't wait to read more...AJ

I loved the up date and I can't wait for the next one. I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next, Keep up the great writing and please post more soon.
Tanya