Yes! Please! You have to you have me wanting more! I love the story and was rooting for Emily.

SEQUEL PLEASE :) xx great chapter, great story, loved your idea. hope there's more to come. :) keep up the great wok.

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That was a sad chapter :(. Maybe you could do an epilogue of important moments in Emily's life! When she reunites with her family, when she gets married, and when she has her first child! That would be so cool, because then you could also show how she mended her relationship with her father!

You're so good! Thank you for writing this. It's so wonderful to read.

Another ace chapter, great work. Very touching, but really enjoyed reading it.
Great work, don't stay away to long ;)

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Poor Amy! That is so sad and awkward for Captain VonTrapp as well.

ahhh update soon i love this story

Thank you for the update :) It was very nice

Oooohhh confrontation! I loved the cooking scene!

woohoo go on Emily. Get her. Really liked this chapter. Kinda hoped for a breakthrough with the Captain and Emikly while they were in the kitchen, but maybe when the witch leaves. Look forward to what happens next.

Very nice story! I would love to read more!

Glad to see that you've updated but I don't think the name Amy is or ever was popular in Germany. Especially in the 30s.

Just pointing it out. :)

Thanks for the chapter! I liked how Emily knew about the Leandler and how she tried to stop Maria from leaving. I especially loved the part about Emily's voice and the drama to come as foreshadowed by her glaring to the Captain at the end. Great job.

I read this a while ago, and I'm happy you've returned so I can see how it ends. Great work and interesting plot, keep it up. Hope you'll be back soon. :):)

Thanks for the update! I think it is kind of cute how the Captain is trying to be nicer to Emily, but she doesn't see it.