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KitsuneOverlord
2009-10-20 . chapter 2
Damn, I love this kind of stuff! Keep up the good work!
Zulu101
2009-08-07 . chapter 1
I'm pleasantly surprised to find that you have started a new arc so to speak in this wonderful and unique crossover (with a totally epic Harry Potter unlike others of course). It was so long since I read the previous fics that I decided to do it again to refresh my memory and I'm happy to say it still holds its appeal the second time around. Keep up the good work and I'll be sure to check your page from now on.
aznblackhowling
2009-08-06 . chapter 2
Nice to see that this story is still being updated. I look forward to the next update.
Helltanz98
2009-07-26 . chapter 2
Really want to see more Harry

Some tech development and of course witnessing the arrival of forces on Earth ya know

oh and a showdown with some Goa'uld or another

The buffy scene was very entertaining though

Would like to find out what happened to the Shadow Primordial Battlecrabs in Harry's earth

Hope you update soon, now I'm going to go to sleep
B.Szoke
2009-06-28 . chapter 2
God I can't wait for the next chapter, it has been ages since I've read genuine hard sci-fi, with all the political maneuvering and intrigue of a Frank Herbert novel, on such a scale. Excellent work, and I am eagerly awaiting the continuation of this series. The political reactions are intriguing, the characterization top notch, and the writing style excellent. It is gems like this this that I love looking for on . Not since Blue Skye Dreams, have I come across such well written sci-fi.
Gogolu
2009-06-28 . chapter 2
Awesome.
Vilkath
2009-06-23 . chapter 2
Nice to see an update as always, some what confusing chapter with so many events happening at once. Especialy the freak out in the libary I had really hoped Faith, Buffy etc would play some important part in the new order. Especialy after how much time was put into Buffy before the banishment.
HolyKnight5
2009-06-23 . chapter 2
And the Pieces start to emerge upon the Chess Table...(grins)...
Diablo
2009-06-21 . chapter 1
hey i love the story but won't you update it soon??
Helltanz98
2009-06-16 . chapter 1
Its good but I've got to ask what did Harry do with the Shadow Battlecrab that was on His Ganymede, or the one on Mars, and what about the Vree base on Mars.
Ferrian
2009-05-24 . chapter 1
I can't wait for the update, your storys are awesome! :D
Murmur
2009-04-17 . chapter 1
Noticed a few grammatical errors but other than that, awesome! You've got one of the most bitchin series on . Can't wait to read more of your talented story.
Vilkath
2009-04-13 . chapter 1
Interesting stuff as always, as much I wouldn't mind reading the orignal backstory being finished in the first part this series this is interesting to. I love the idea of time spent in the hell dimension used as a training period. It has been a while since I watched the early seasons of buffy but didn't angel claim be stuck in that hell dimension for several thousand years?

Gives Harry one heck of a boost to his training schedual in relation to most his enemies on earth and beyond. I do kind hope that something useful happens with Buffy and Faith. Perhaps making them his avatar's or something? As they are only partialy embracing the slayer spirit they are weak, but what if Harry finds a way make them the embodiment of the slayer's spirits instead? Instead just brushing against some the powers in times of need to have full access to them, plus harry's training and enhancments.
Michael01
2009-04-12 . chapter 1
more, more, more, more more!! please im dying 2 know what happens!!
Gogolu
2009-04-08 . chapter 1
You are alive.

:)

I love this series and what you created with ending of last story is amazing.
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