This somehow really deeply strikes me. It's short, sweet, painful, and overall, just so powerful that I'm sure this fic will stick around in my mind for awhile. You definitely deserve more credit for this than you're receiving. Brilliant job!

Lovely, elegant, moving and too damn short! There's something so sweet, so soft, in Charlie's feelings for Bill that you'd never expect of the dragon-wrangler tough guy. I'd really enjoy seeing you do more with this pair: they could be brilliant in the right light.

~B. Suffragette

Wow, that is powerful. I really like it.

gah I'm sad now but this was a good little fic the bed thing reminds me of something else but i cant put my finger on it