A good story with a good plot, but with some minor grammar mistakes. Aside from that, it was a good story!

that was the ** write more :p

Hi.

I think this story is very wel written.

That was an awsome fic! I can't find many fics where Yugi is the one in control. I LOVED your fic!

I really liked this ff! I LOVE Yuugi beeing the Seme. Oh yeah, there should be more fanfictions like this out there...

I hope you'll continue write ff's like that. I'd love to read them.

Oh, and from Germany so I'm sorry if my english suckes. -.-

wow. amazing scenes!

woohoo i love it
yugi as the seme yami as uke
baby try mpreg

Aww!! This fic was amazing!

I personally like seeing Yugi as the seme every now-and-then, and Yami as the uke.
It just stirs things up a bit, and makes it exciting =D

Thanks for posting!

that was good

I liked the story. It was really good.

I liked the lemon. It was really good.

I like how Yugi was the one in control, but personally like it when Yami is in control.

I hope that you do another soon.

Until then...

It was good, very good & i look forward to seeing more from you

That was good. I like seeing Yugi dominant every once in a while. I thought that it was good lemon.