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AnimaniacXOX 5/6/10 . chapter 3
May MUST be in this!
Please update!
Kapuchino357 11/16/09 . chapter 3
This is soo cool! I'm gonna be stalking this story!

BTW I vote Ritchie!
lulu halulu 7/7/09 . chapter 3
cool story so far! Update soon please!
BrainDead96 5/24/09 . chapter 1
That's a very cool idea. I loved Ash's reaction. You should do more characters.
Bass Clef Love 5/24/09 . chapter 3
I'm ignoring the choices you gave me: PAUL PAUL PAUL! OH! But make him paired up with Dawn! YAY! IKARISHIPPING FOREVA! WE!
Bass Clef Love 5/24/09 . chapter 2
Hmm...a little more romance than humor, but still pretty good!
Bass Clef Love 5/24/09 . chapter 1
AHAHAHA! That is FU-NAY! You, like, completely NAILED Ash's reaction to all that stuff!
severineyung 5/23/09 . chapter 3
Lol, Brock is hopeless! I'm glad fanfiction ISN'T a true prediction of the future! Haha, Croagunk spoiling his moments and Nurse Joy using it against him!

Oh cool, I didn't think of Ritchie!

More ideas for future POVs: The legendaries: mew, mewtwo, lugia (my fav legendary!), suicune, celebi, darkrai...especially Lugia!
Pikana 5/23/09 . chapter 3
Awesome Chappter! I luv ya Croakgunk!

The future bit was quite humorus... idiot

DO TRACY! Most storys with him is about an idiot so I wanna se reactions!

Pikana
severineyung 5/23/09 . chapter 2
Lol, is her sister actually COMPLIMENTING her for once?

" If she were to have one of them as her boyfriend, Ash would be the one, as dense as he was sometimes." LOL again
severineyung 5/23/09 . chapter 1
Lol funny! Yeah I agree that many of the shippings are really quite bizarre and disturbing. Especially the one with Gary *shudders.
Pikana 5/22/09 . chapter 2
Pokeshipping Pokeshipping! Good calls. I liked the ash one definately... Brock so... should be next. Good job
GGDeimos 5/22/09 . chapter 2
You should do one in brock's POV! That would be hilarious!
poisonsugardreams 5/7/09 . chapter 1
i can totally see ash doing this. good job, its really interesting and amusing!
MyTeenageDream 5/3/09 . chapter 1
lol! u should make a sequel of the others reaction. Funny i have a simlar story written only its youtube...
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