 xoVanilla-Bean 2009-04-15 . chapter 1I don't know if it's just me, but the last line seemed so hopelessly sad. Which makes me like it. :)
I like the formatting of it, and how you gave three instances where he called her, 'Goddamnit, Shera'.
It's so short, but it packs a powerful punch. Really nice job.
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