Hah. I finally managed to read the rest of this story & review it! (I bet you weren't expecting this.)

Really well written and a good idea, but I got confused a lot throughout the story because I'm not familiar with the characters names. But still, good job?

:D i like it! :D nice! lol write more!

This seems interesting, the original little mermaid was always my favorite. I like the comparison of the sun to a lamp. Though Ahiru seems too much like princess tutu.

*applaud*

i love this story. but Why did you choose this stroy?