When I played Eversion, I was expecting a light hearted game of Cocoron-esque platforming. When I finished Eversion, I was emotionally dead-err, pleasant and at peace.

This simple story fits what I expected the game to be perfectly. You have my subscription, good fellow.

Dang it, I was about to do the same thing!
Don't make it sound too creepy in the begining, or it will not be a suprise when-

OK so far.

I really enjoyed this fic! You've done an excellent job bringing the characters to life, and your plot is both original and yet consistent with the source material. Most of all though, I absolutely love the grinding of human flesh and the pools of blood spilling forth underneath the inky black clouds, the cold skeletal hands bursting from the walls and reaching for you, clawing at you, gripping your eyes and tearing them from their sockets!

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