is this based on the other endings I knew from some other players?

I just won the game this evening and ended up with the ending when D asked Ashley to hold his hand before he slowly withered and reached the eternity! X3

but, I guess it is a good choice to make it this way... it is somewhat filled with nice ANGST and covered with lots of D's emotions... I like it so much...

you must make more amazing fics like this, :D

Trace Memory deserves good fanfiction-and this is it! D was always my favorite character, and in my opinion you did a wonderful job of writing his last final moments. You have a flair for writing, and I enjoyed reading it :D!

Nice. Gave me goosebump... whether it be from the ghost, the story, or both?