 Aelita Lyoko 2009-07-22 . chapter 1I like the story for the most part but I would never have a baby suck on a pacifier with any type of alcohol on it that kinda makes me sick... but other then that I like that story good job |
 JuMiKu 2009-07-07 . chapter 1Ouch! What a cunning old coot! *laugh* Poor are we who have been born with sharp little teeth! So unloved. My mom always kept on complaining about her sore breasts. And in contrast to Naruto I don't have fangs! |
 BukkakeNoJutsu 2009-04-22 . chapter 1Pretty awesome. |
 Eromancer 2009-04-19 . chapter 1hahahahaha |
 Kakuri 2009-04-19 . chapter 1Hilarious. :) |
 HarrySlytherinson 2009-04-17 . chapter 1please update soon! |
 EfrainMan 2009-04-09 . chapter 1LOLZ, such a heartwarming story and then, TEETH! XD I loved it! |
 Steven Kodaly 2009-04-09 . chapter 1Why do I get the feeling that, for Sarutobi, this will mean war? Well done, Minnionette! |
 yellulhchicken 2009-04-09 . chapter 1hahaha!! oh Sarutobi that old wiley monkey! I like! I definitely like.
the story is amusing and yet still is able to display the intricacies of humaity. |
 dogbertcarroll 2009-04-09 . chapter 1LOL!
His teeth make me wonder if Minato wasn't related to the Inuzuka. |
 Rosz-chan 2009-04-08 . chapter 1And there's the catch, lmao.
As usual, I had fun reading this; you really have a way with words. |
 CW 2009-04-08 . chapter 1 I'm sorry this was a one shot, it was really funny! |