interesting...

aaawwww...this is sad :'( Good job though!

this is a sivearly awesome story!

Wow! When I wade through stories on this site, I rarely expect to find writing of this quality, especially related to a children's series. I know there is some very well written stuff around here, but much more that is just...not. You've done really well with this.

Cute stories. Very melancholy, angsty theme to them. I'd like to see the tone change with the next one, perhaps something a little more hopeful/optimistic? :)

PLSE FINISH!

*sobbs and holds on to jen* I wish she didnt die TT

Great story! You should definetaly keep it going and add more chapters. The chapter is a little short though.

Kira

I think this story has real potenyial and i think I'm going to start reading it... Update soon and I definatley will, I'll review every chapter! But please check my profile... I want as many hits as I can get! PLEASE!