|Reviews for Untold|
| Wishing Rose 8/10/10 . chapter 3
| Wishing Rose 8/10/10 . chapter 2
aaawwww...this is sad :'( Good job though!
| Death-by-Vampire 4/8/10 . chapter 3
this is a sivearly awesome story!
| Running Anna 3/18/10 . chapter 3
Wow! When I wade through stories on this site, I rarely expect to find writing of this quality, especially related to a children's series. I know there is some very well written stuff around here, but much more that is just...not. You've done really well with this.
| arin 1/24/10 . chapter 3
Cute stories. Very melancholy, angsty theme to them. I'd like to see the tone change with the next one, perhaps something a little more hopeful/optimistic? :)
| Brianna 10/21/09 . chapter 3
| Gocaclleta 9/28/09 . chapter 1
*sobbs and holds on to jen* I wish she didnt die TT
| Kira 4/10/09 . chapter 1
Great story! You should definetaly keep it going and add more chapters. The chapter is a little short though.
| EssaTheTwerp 4/10/09 . chapter 1
I think this story has real potenyial and i think I'm going to start reading it... Update soon and I definatley will, I'll review every chapter! But please check my profile... I want as many hits as I can get! PLEASE!