yaayaay!

loved this one! can't wait for it to continue. Hopefully you'll be doing that soon.haha.
Really am curious how Parker en Lyle are gonna behave and react towards each other.
really liked the part when Lyle was afraid that MP might force some high-heels onto him.lmao
and the part when he watched her changing in that hotel room! so lyle! very well written characters.

looking forward to a sequel!

-jo

Really good fic so far- and I love how you have Miss Parker and Lyle ... please keep writing this~

You do not have anonymous review enabled? Oh.
But, my goodness, they are all so... uptight, if that is the correct terminology. Why so angry? They need to learn to calm down a little once in a while. I know it is not really canon, in any way whatsoever, but I was thinking, with Miss Parker's Inner Sense abilities, it may not be so good for the electronics -- on the plane -- for her to be so angry. I don't know, that's just me, but I always imagined something similar with Catherine, when she got angry, that she could inadvertantly manipulate... things. Maybe that's a bit too Carrie? E, not a good reference with those two being so angry-grr!
Oh well, we'll see what the next chapter has in store...
Overall, I just thought: very angry people, need to learn to take things easy. And I was trying to think of something to write, rather than just saying that I'd read it and would probably read the next chapter when it came out -- or on... the webpage... Hmm...? I suppose 'on' would be the more correct word. So we'll see then.

Hi just read chapter 4 it was very good. Can't wait for the the next chapter. Poor Mr. Lyle on the plane from hell.

Hi just read your story it was very good.