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AP Especially 1/3/03 . chapter 1
I like the set-up and the irony, but I couldn't help wondering- did Dotty and the boys ever wish Amanda a happy birthday?
Rangerbaldwin 12/21/01 . chapter 1
Hey, this is great! I ran out of things to look at on the first page, so I skipped to the back. I am not sure how old your story is, but it's a timeless classic. I loved watching Amanda squir and Lee having to keep his mouth shut. I hope you get this review. Ranger B.
Debbie 7/23/01 . chapter 1
Not bad, it's nice to read something when they are still in the early stages of dating.
rankamateur 7/15/01 . chapter 1
Best Birthday anybody every had! Good story. Good Job.
Michelle 3/11/01 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed the story, but felt like it left me hanging. I would love to hear about the rest of the wonderful birthday evening. Any sequels in the making?
erika 1/23/01 . chapter 1
CUTE:D
Dimonah Tralon 7/31/00 . chapter 1
That was really good! Please write more!
Chris 4/11/00 . chapter 1
I love this little piece. You capture exactly how I feel when my birthday comes around and I wonder will anyone notice it. Nice surprise from Lee.
Jo 4/11/00 . chapter 1
This is just like Lee to come up with something this complicated ! Guess he hasn't had much of a chance to surprise someone for his/her birthday during his

wilder days and has to make up for it by putting in extra effort :-) Good job, Bridget
Kate 4/11/00 . chapter 1
What a lovely story - I really enjoyed it!
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