haha, I think the letters make it all the more interesting too, so keep going with those

this is looking better and better!
hester

SOPHIE! I know who she ends up to be *giggles patronisingly*. But I won't write it here for the benefit of other readers.

This is the benifit of being real-life friends with someone of fanfiction! ;)

Always Keep Faith.
Mrs Walter Blythe

Glad you updated. i like the bit about the melancholy poet!

Also, it's a fantastic idea to have it so familiar to AotI-with four of them renting a place. I am already imaging them-Di the Anne, Nan, Stella Maynard, Faith as Priscilla, and Persis a more decisive but just as frivolous Philippa!

My pleasure, I know how wonderful reviews are. And thank you for all of yours-I'm glad you got "it".:D heehe but I have a heap of other work to do and must write the next chapter...not quite sure what was in the last.

Well, I must say I never thought Alice Parker could be so errgh! nor that Walter could lower himself to be so attracted to such a person. Poor boy, I have a pretty sad idea about what went on in his mind (this does rbing Una in). Would you like to know what it is? Not exactly a dream situation, more like a nighmare, actually. Anyway, update soon!:D I love Di and her hair is what makes her gorgeous and what makes Jack love her and what makes her Di! You'd think Walter'd stick up for his chummiest sister (although Rilla is making head way)...:O

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Ahh! Try not to rush your sentences. Remember, one idea per sentence too. Keep it simple and beautiful.

I love the description, it really is lovely. And that dream, it's so vivid and real. You can just see it. The thought of it sends shivers down my spine! Well done!

Very sweet letter. Walter...no ne really understands his morbidness. He's trapped in a cage he cannot escape...except by blood, gore, war and DEATH!

I cannot wait to read more :D

hehe...Walter is a melancholy poet indeed! :]

i like it so far, bbut be careful of punctuation and spelling. also try to make the story flow more by linking events smoothly.

the letter was so sweet and i really love the bit where Di is remebering past times in Avonlea. that was wonderfully wriiten

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Good you updated! But...wasn't DI given the compass in the last chapter?

This is good so far, although I agree with AFO that it could have a bit more detail. It is kind of moving fast-though I guess you don't want to take too long until she ends up at Redmond.
I'm not saying I don't like it! I like the last sentence of Ch2. More please!

I do like it. But why did Di feel like laughing at the end?

Hm. little does she know what Walter will do and what will happen to him...

there was a lovley phrase...but i don't remember what it was.>:S*angry at bad memory*

but you could be a little bit more detailed about what happened between Di and Jack

i love that match:)

I like wher ethis is going. As for doll play, it is helpful to sort out ideas before you write them down.

Ahahaha, i like it; very much.Except you could put a little more detail into it. But I am NOT liking madame jasie pye's daughter, gr she is such a "you know what". But wasn't Di talking to Walter on their way to the dance?

more moe more i am so glad you have lots of ideas and i like the title too!

i await more with GREAT anticipation :D:D