And so the loose end is tied...the story is going to end soon, isn't it? :[

Nice chapter, I'm looking forward to the next one!! Oh, I almost forgot to mention, I think that it makes sense and is really cool that Iruka's chakra swirls Kakashi's. :]

-Auphora66

Hey wonderful sentemental chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter. It sounds like you are being harrassed for grammer and spelling. Dang people just enjoy the fic without criticizm. Lets see them write a great fic like this with perfect grammer. Ignoreing them is a great idea. Anyways thanks for giving me a wonderful fic that will give me peacegull sleep. See you later.

oh update? thank to you. lovely chapter. i hope you will write next chapter soon

I love reading your story. And grammer and spelling doesn't matter to me becuz i read to read the story.
I like a feminine Iruka...hes so cute!
Mucho-luv!

This chapter explains alot. Thanks for update.

fast update! thank you, this chapter is great. tsunade and jiraiya married? so cute. cute couple,i think. and end of the chapter is so sweet, ha . i can`t wait for more

this chapter is so perfect , i hope next will be soon.

Don't feel bad about asking for reviews, anybody would want to know if their story is being read and appreciated. And you're doubly justified because you wanted to reach 200 reviews. Congrats!

Hurrah for plot development! You've done a great job of editing the original storyline to suit your own story.

Looking forward to your next update. :)

I hate it when people do that! Complaining to authors is just rude! =/
But this chapter was still lovely! I liked the twist that you gave it and I'm glad that it was posted so quickly! ^^
Thanks for the update! XD

Great chapter. I'm glad that everthing worked out between Iruka and Kakashi. I sense more drama with Danzo coming. I can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!

aw ) his chakra ) what a funny sweet detail ^_^

thanks for updait

Great explainations here sweet can' wait to se what come's next :)

Jiraiya?!?!?! ALIVE! :D :D Hell yes. Now the only thing left to complete this merry band of awesomeness is that Danzo get's his ** kicked. *hint hint*


I don't think Iruka was too girly in this chapter. Now if he was a damsel in distress then yes that would be very girly.

hey, blue. just wanted to add my two cents in. at first, i wasn't going to post a review because of exactly what you put in your a/n from chapter 14. i felt that i was being asked to review only to get the next update and i felt like i wasn't going to be told to do that just to read the update. you either update or you dont. that being said, the reason i AM posting a review is because of your comments, not really the chapter itself and i am totally for what you are saying. for someone to say that you should have had the best of your fics out there and that your grammar needed to improve, that's horse-hockey! i'd like to see that person produce a great story like this in between all the demands in your life. i think your fic is great, so great i have had this fic put on my auto updater via email since i think chapter 4! so i have been following this story for some time and i think it's flipping great man. you keep up the good work and above all, dont let haters make this any less fun or a stress reliever than it is. that is your bag and you keep it!

Many thanks for continuing this series, much appreciated. I look forward to reading the next chapter.
It is nice to read an author's work that plays with Iruka's possibilities and potential as a shinobi outside of the Academy.
Thank you again and I hope that you have a good week.
Cheers!
Ousakouse