...Hiwatari no baka! That is pretty much all I can say. Would it really kill him to say something nice? ...probably. This was good and I feel bad for them all except Kai he's even more of an ass than usual.

Aha! I had sort of known it...and it was sort of unexpected at the same time!
Though in all honesty I feel really bad for Bryan! =P. And Maxie, but mainly Bryan.
Bahah! Great ending! XD And I liked the lemon! Shmexy is what it was! =D
Oh Kai...all for your own benefit you self-centered ass...just the way we like him! =D
Woot! Finished story! That must be nice =P

:O Last chapter!!
Well it was great all the same! xD

Poor tala. Cannot wait for more
:-)

Heya Mika here, wow, that was definetly and probably couldn't get anymore awkward, Tala sorta deserved it though but atleast he still has Kai and he will keep him happy and entertained. Great lemon by the way. Keep up the great work and please update soon. XXMikaXX

I have serious internet probs.

:(


Thats a good reason to sty with someone.

for sex.

It really is!

i just knew something like that gonna happen!

i can't really say i feel sorry for Max, but i do feel sorry for
Bryan...

XD i love how horny, self-centred and
'I-got-what-I-came-for-everybody-else-just-die' way Kai is xP
he's the BEST!

“Don’t worry, Tala. I’ll stay with you. The sex was good.” exactly what I'm talking about XD

I LOVE the ENDING!

hahaha the sex was good hahaha Kai is so great XDD i loved it!

Hi

I think the lemon was good.
could have been a tad more descriptive but I'm sure your next one will be alot better!

I so was waiting for this to happen.
I can't wait to see what happens next.

Please update!
Beywriter

THE ENDING WAS MARVELLOUS.

I HAVE NOTHING ELSE TO SAY!

BAI!

I thought the lemon was good!
POOR MAX... YOU MEANY! *hugs Max* it'sok Maximum. You shall go do some peeping with Bryan later.

LOL at kai
“Don’t worry, Tala. I’ll stay with you. The sex was good.”

It is how it should be.

Nice update. it was the "FINAL COUNTDOWN! DOO DOO DOO DOO DUH DUH DOO DOO DOO, DOO DOO DOO DO!"

BAHAHA! Stupid Tala.


I like the ending, Kai is a self-serving bastard. Ooh, how I love a lecherous Kai. XD


Poor Bryan though...=(


Max...not so much. XD

Yay Tala's staying with Kai =D

Poor Maxie and Bryan... they should go have sex together xD

A nice ending xD

I'm happy you updated and hope you can keep updating. Tala's gonna have so much guilt when he's found out.

GOD BRYAN DON'T BE SO SUSPICIOUS! Tala's ONLY cheating on you (huff) men!

I enjoyed this chapter i did, i did!

Yummy citrus is...yummy xD

I was quite innocently writing a lemon the other day when suddenly...my tutor picked it up! I have never been soo embaressed in my life...he was like "what the hell is this filth! and who the hell is Bryan!?" lmao

Annyway...I shall take my leave; tata!