SO GOOD!I WANT MORE GRAY X CLAIRE FANFICS!PLEASE!

Er. Wow. Scottish.. Gray? ..ahahaha.
This was.. er... steamy is the only thing that comes to mind.
Loved it!

(P.s. I agree with HMGirly.. We NEED an Australian Gray. Just the thought makes me feel giggly..)

If I were to give you one piece of advice, it'd be this: cut down on the before hand information. The family info makes sense, but much of the morning routine could be easily skimmed over. Instead of a paragraph for the shower, a paragraph for the hair, a paragraph for getting dressed, cut it back to a sentence or two. If you're really adamant about keeping all the info, make this into a multi-chapter, and use the prep for the first chapter. But as I oneshot I'd have to say that the prep made it rather boring.

-Ciella

Yikes. XP

That was...OK. Okay, it was hot. And now you've inspired me to try and...write...something...never mind. And Scottish!Gray is hot.

You're really good at anything you write! *puts on author alert* Keep it up!

great story. i like the idea of a budding romance between gray and claire.

WOW. That was... er, I don't know.

Anyway, I love it! Update soon, please!

that was great! very well written. i liked it. i really want to see you continue this. this is really good. i almost fell over laughing when i read the part that said Kai and Gray are brothers! i haven't read anything that ever made them brothers before! continue please!

Ugh my face is going to be red for days. That was amazing you did a really good job. Very um hot? I'm not a huge lemon reader (due to the fact I'm freakishly shy) but I was impressed. Was it your first?

AMAZING! I caught myself hoping for another chapter. Oh, well.
Keep up with the great stories!

OMG SEXY SCOTTISH ACCENT GRAY.

Man. I would kill for a Scottish accent. I'm mostly Scottish and yet I fail at it... but DAMN, Gray. XD

I really liked how you made every part a character from one of the HM games. My personal favourite was, "an oil tycoon from Texas, a Vaughn Jones" Haha. Mary and Vaughn, priceless. XD

Great work. :D

OKAY.

Now that you have updated something.. I'm inspired to attempt to.. augh. Do something >.<

This story was freaking amazing ^^ and Scottish Gray only made it more unbelievably awesome. I demand a series! With... with... French!Gray and Swedish!Gray and Irish!Gray (and eventually Australian!Gray, of course.)

Well, you know you're insanely fabulous at ANYTHING you attempt. Continue, woman!

(But don't you dare neglect MEMF :P)

- Hannah banana

oh. em. gee.

THAT WAS SO CUTE!

Haha you are so right. Gray is amazingly hot with an accent. And I love how you portrayed the characters' personalities so accurately. Amazing job. There were a few grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing a proof-reading couldn't fix.

Hot. Very hot. I am always eager to read the stories you share with this site. I did, however caught quite a few errors (spelling & punctuation). The most common was when you spelt 'baRELY' as 'baRLEY'. Just so you know.

I have two words for this:

Hot.
Sexy.
Wait, did I mention hot?

Yeah, Gray with a Scottish accent is a total hunk, like he isn't already, but yeah. I really liked the storyline. It was interesting and made me want to keep reading until the SEXY-TIME! :D
Ah, I love the sexy-time. LOVE IT!
You should make a sequel. Where Claire and Gray go on a cruise to Jamaica. Yea. Jamaica. Cruise. Sexy-time.
Yeah.


OMG! I just realized that...this is the first time I've logged into this site in about like, three months! I need to get mah bootay movin'!
Maybe I should go write? (No, not any sexy-times like your awesome-talented butt)
OKAY AWAY!
WORD.

Oh, wow! Trust me, you did a really good job with this. It's almost eleven oclock at night over here and I have to get up in five hours to start doing very-important-looking-band-related-things, but I read this anyway. I'm so glad I did. I'll be able to sleep now. Lawl.

I definitely favorited this. ClaireXGray isn't exactly my favorite pairing, but coming from you it's still some of the best stuff out there.

Good job!

~Amme Moto

P.S. Faved!