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Reviews for: Principle of Explosion
hisokauzumaki
2009-11-22 . chapter 2
Please update this soon!
sweetyamiyugigirl
2009-09-24 . chapter 2
LIKE! O.O! What is going on? why, what huh? please update!
Hiezen Uchiha
2009-04-19 . chapter 2
we like and we can't wait for more...^_^
falconsblade
2009-04-16 . chapter 1
Well written. The storyline flows well also. Can't wait for more. I like the way you described they way they feel. They're mechanical after all and are going to get sensory data differently then us, but still kind of the same. There are only so many ways to "feel".
Hiezen Uchiha
2009-04-13 . chapter 1
yes bring on the rest of the cast...
CasoraTigerKin
2009-04-12 . chapter 1
This is great! I loved all the interuptions and how Jazz and Prowl reacted to them.

I hope you continue this!
xoxo
2009-04-10 . chapter 1
Oh my goodness that was so romantic. You absolutely have to continue this
Lady Katana4544
2009-04-10 . chapter 1
I think that you should continue this and bring in those characters as well ~ though you already know my opinion of this seeing as you posted it on LJ. =]
Tessombra
2009-04-10 . chapter 1
Oh please, by all means. I'm curious as to why Sentinel instead of Jazz was chosen--and how you'll work Hound and Mirage here.
Ralyena Starrling
2009-04-09 . chapter 1
I certainly think you should go on.And I also agree that you should have someone hit on Prowl and let Jazz go pycho ninja on their afts.^-^Take care.
Randomstrike
2009-04-09 . chapter 1
Sweet~
U should try to bring on some characters from the old crew but have them be 'interested' in Prowl, thus making a comotion and Jazz's inner possesive mech come out. kinda like a love triangle or something ^^

Love the JAZZ/Prowlie fic X3
Independent.C.
2009-04-09 . chapter 1
If you don't continue you will leave many Prowl/Jazz fans in a very bad mood...
Meiza
2009-04-09 . chapter 1
Nicely well written. I really like their interaction, and how Bee almost - almost! - caught them in the act.

"No. I haven't. Seen. It."

Smooth Prowl, very smooth. *laughs*

You should totally continue with this! ^^
panthergirl29
2009-04-09 . chapter 1
Sweet! Update soon! Please!
The lunatic who cares
2009-04-09 . chapter 1
I inspired a story!
My artwork inspired a Jazz/Prowl story!

Whe!

Oh, and, MORE! NOW!
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