 LunaticV 2009-12-07 . chapter 1lol
i dunno whether Luffy is stupid or smart here XP |
 cRaZyMaN676 2009-11-20 . chapter 1Funny, in so many ways. Nami thinks about "less clothing equals smarter brains" and Luffy shows up naked. Robin "happens" to be reading a "dirty book" (for whatever reason XP), and Luffy decides to see what it is, for once. Somehow SOMEBODY (points at Robin) decides to try their own experiment on the two with a simple question.
And it all goes up in the lol-copter-colored smoke after that.
BRILLIANT!!
LATER!! |
 YoiYoi.savy 2009-10-30 . chapter 1AWW brilliant this was perfect, completly IC, naughty but nice, with a little cherry on top. you did great again cudos |
 night-owl269 2009-09-16 . chapter 1AW! his last line was so sweet! |
 CHeRRy PoP LoVe 2009-09-10 . chapter 1Wow. Is all i have to say... |
 MarHeavenAngel 2009-09-02 . chapter 1A baby is love!
That's so cute!
But Luffy is...dang...to the point!
How embarassing! |
 staggered incite 2009-08-11 . chapter 1Oh, that was so *right*! So awesome. |
 Sweetness 2009-08-03 . chapter 1 Omg!! That was just so cute and funny!! |
 Lady Linaae-Spirit of the Pond 2009-08-02 . chapter 1awwh! this is so cute, ya just got to love Luffy... <3 |
 Sonicmario 2009-06-24 . chapter 1XDXDXDXD So cute, so true~ lolz. Great job! |
 HecatonchiresLM 2009-06-18 . chapter 1Aw, so much WAFF in the final line. Well done. |
 quivering quill 2009-05-29 . chapter 1aww what a sweet thing to say! |
 InfernoAngelofFlare 2009-05-28 . chapter 1OMG! despite the hullarious and disturbing topic, that was the cutest thing I ever heard Luffy say! (even though this is just a fanfic ^^ although it's probably something he would say) awesome story! |
 Lord of Murder 2009-05-21 . chapter 1lol that was hilarious and mildly disturbing. |
 Mikako-37 2009-05-19 . chapter 1 Aw Luffy's so sweet and so incredibly oblivious.
I love how he seems quite clever in this fic and still really childish. |