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Fire Green As Grass
2009-11-18 . chapter 6
I couldn't stop laughing after I read this! Please keep writing your Ouran parody fics, this just made my day!
The Pinball Wizard
2009-10-25 . chapter 6
Sex god!Mori
Lol.
The Pinball Wizard
2009-10-25 . chapter 5
I love Mori's section. :D
The Pinball Wizard
2009-10-25 . chapter 4
Hahaha, you just gotta love Kyoya.
The Pinball Wizard
2009-10-25 . chapter 3
Lime! Lemon! Orange! Grapefruit! Pinapple!
LOL.
You do see alot of these "Haruhi's pregnant" fics... Hmm...
The Pinball Wizard
2009-10-25 . chapter 2
LOL!
OMG! A CLIFFY!
That's my new motto.
~Lance & Elliott
The Pinball Wizard
2009-10-24 . chapter 1
Epic. I can imagine Kyoya sitting there reading the badfic. Heh.
65353962
2009-10-08 . chapter 6
I loved the chapter abou Smut's fics clichês. But you forgot one. The Slutty Haruhi clichê. Honestly, I don't think she's so... "modern" to be engaged in a threesome with the Twins or Tamaki and Kyoya. Or in the worst case scenario, sleep (to use a moderate word) with the six guys.

I don't know how about you guys, but smut fics with Hani freaks me out. It's just too pedo for me.
Lillith 06
2009-10-05 . chapter 6
I loved the chapter about M-Rated fanfics.
About Kyoya and Mori being depicted as Sex Gods in fanfics: Well... People believe that the Quiet ones are the worst. Even if we don't know with they had any sexual experience.
Another point, I really don't know why some fangirls finds rape cute. Seriously, rape is a crime and it's not a laughing matter.
And M-preg is disgusting. I mean, there's a lot of woman out there and you have to make a guy or two pregnants?
If you what your Yaoi couple to raise a children, why not to make one of them donate his semen? or adopt a child? It's better and a lot more realistic than getting the Uke pregnant
have-a-cookie
2009-09-29 . chapter 1
My God! You are so funny! I love this story, and your story on Mary-Sues. I'm subbing to both.

Seriously...just made my night ^^
Lyla D.
2009-09-29 . chapter 3
yeah.. im sorry, i couldn't quite read all of it... all the "Cliffies" and bad writing finally got to me XD but i admit, you are really good at writing these types of things, really entertaining =) and somewhat helpful :D
animeloveramy
2009-09-29 . chapter 6
lol! ^_^
Melancholic Marshmallow
2009-09-25 . chapter 6
I totally lol'ed. xD “Us in bed” and “not us in bed”- EPIC. What is it with M-Preg badfic writers? And why Kyoya? I can't imagine Kyoya being anywhere near a messy, screaming baby, let alone have one growing inside him.
Zizzi Hungarian
2009-09-22 . chapter 6
You left out the never-say-out-loud sentences, for example "I'm horny now!" And we all know that Mori is a sex God and his ** is sexy beyond imagination. Argh, I'm going to faint near Kyouya...
Tenshigami
2009-09-21 . chapter 6
I have not laughed this hard in months, no years! The horrors of Ouran Fanfiction, REVEALED! Seriously though, keep on it! The world needs relief from every Mary-Sue/Plotless/Just-plain-WRONG Ouran fics out there!
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