More, please! There aren't nearly enough Billy fanfics, and not many worth reading at that. Proceed, Moon!

Wow. Nice story, even though it is only 2 chapters in. It seems like you have an excellent handle on the language and characters. Kudos. I'll be keeping my eye on this story.

Wow. That was... just, incredable. You've got the accent down pat, m'dear! :D
It's very cool, getting to see inside Billy's head. Now, I'm not expert, but he seems very in character to me! Which is awesome, ya'know.
Great job!

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE BILLY ELLIOT. :D
Been my favourite film since I was about seven.
And this was amazingly amazing. :)
“I’ve never seen ya dance,” said Billy, and right then Michael could have smacked him. “Who’s to say you’re not utterly brilliant at dancin’?” :) Love that most, I think.

*sigh* I must watch the movie to really appriciate this.

Still, I loved it. You are an amazingly talented authoress, and I loved how you emphasized the accents--awesome!

Great job! :D