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beauty0102 9/25/11 . chapter 1
this is thebestestfriendsforever just moved to a different account.

good story.
RPM Shadow 9/21/11 . chapter 1
Lot it! Love it!
Rachel-is-a-Jedi 6/6/11 . chapter 1
This really should have been in the movie! Amazing work, I love your style!
BigTimeGleekBTR 12/22/10 . chapter 1
Loved It! :D
FelipeMarcusThomas 6/5/10 . chapter 1
This was a scene that really should have been in the movie. Nicely written.
Fierce Queen 4/13/10 . chapter 1
Oh that was great! I agree with you. Peter should've had a few making up scenes! I loved it. Lucy is the sneaky one when it comes to making up :D Great job Rose!

Aslan's Blessings,

Fierce
Narnia lover 1/31/10 . chapter 1
Wonderful!
WatsonandMary4ever 10/12/09 . chapter 1
A great story. Very good.
thebestestfriendsforever 9/9/09 . chapter 1
great story.
Queen Su 7/25/09 . chapter 1
Aww! I love this! You put Peter and Lucy in character and it was a lovely story that left me with a good feeling. :) Awesome job! This is splendid!

All for Aslan's glory,

Queen Susan the Gentle
Highqueen Julietta 6/2/09 . chapter 1
NO, its not lame !

but so cute... I love their bonding!

very touching oneshot !

HQJ
King Caspian the Seafarer 4/19/09 . chapter 1
Too lame? Not at all! As Peter said, "Everything's perfect". ;D

I missed the Peter/Lucy friendship in the movie as well. Moviemakers don't seem to like apologies, because they left out Edmund's in LWW after he's rescued, and now the one that Lucy really did deserve in PC. *sigh*. What shall we do with Andrew Adamson? :)

Great job, though, connecting that scene from LWW with this. I love when Caspian walks up and is a bit confused about what's going on. ;) Unfortunately I can hear Ben B's Spanish accent saying the line...(NO!) ;D

Lion be with you,

KC
Haley Potter 4/19/09 . chapter 1
hey that was an awesome story! they should have had a scene like that in the movie! peter and lucy are so cute! they didn't do them justice in this film
DaizyEvans 4/10/09 . chapter 1
Could definitely imagine this on screen. Good job ;D
LucyCrewe11 4/10/09 . chapter 1
Lame? Good heavens no! I LOVED it. this was one of the cutest one-shots I've ever read! Having a similar scene to this in the actual movie might not have been a bad idea-it would have been rather nice if you ask me. And I agree with you that Peter not listening to Lucy was worse than the kiss scene. So they kissed, what the heck does that matter seeing as they're never going to see each other again? What's importaint is that Peter tell Lucy he's sorry and mean it! However, in a strange way, I always saw the scene where he takes her hands and says, "It's not how I thought it would be, but it's alright." As a sort of patching-up between them but I don't think it was quite enough. good job on this fic.
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