I love Quistis and Xu! It's great to see them as a pairing because Xu is largely ignored in fan fiction. Anyway, this is great story. I don't even know what to say because it just seems so obvious that you are amazing.

wow. damn. you did it again. umm...yeah, damn. everything i said in review of your other piece applies here, that way i save myself the trouble of typing it and you the trouble of reading it.

Xu's pov was so powerfully done which makes this fanfic soooo sexy (not in a lemony way) and sensual. Really well written!

I like this, lots and lots and lots. Granted, Xu's characterization is very much a matter for fanon, as she gets almost no screen time, but I /like/ how you create her voice here: calm, self-posessed, obviously in love without being pathological or overdramatic it the way most teenagers are - but still with little notes of jealousy and wonder that make it evident that no matter how grown up she and Quistis have been forced to become, they *are* still kids. The writing style is nice, light, subtle, sketching solid and tactile impressions without drowning in too much description or too many events. Simply lovely.

Wow. Yuri with taste. There's something you don't see everyday. That was simply beautiful.

That was amazing. And beautiful. I want to write like that.

What a beautiful story! I really enjoyed it. I saw barely no errors grammar wise..and..just wow. I love the descriptions. I could picture them together in my mind. Keep on writing! You have talent. :D

Hey! First time I've been able to read the story in full, and geez...way to make me remember why I obsess over your writing!