OMG OMG WHAT GOING TO HAPPEN YOU JUST LEFT US READER ON A CLIFTHANGER THAT WAS SO COOL WRITE MORE PLEASE I LOVE THE THE STORY SO MUCH ITS AWESOME YOU'RE AWESOME FOR WRITING THIS GREAT IDEA IN THE STORY CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE AND I HOPE EVERYTHING GOING TO BE OK THE LAST LINE SCARYS ME WHAT WILL HAPPEN :)

OMG OMG come on they just kiss right RIGHT come on they should kiss more and even r they soulmate it better be so they can live happy lift together come i love the story it's awesome you're awesome keep going can't wait to read more you're work write soon very soon :)

Wow this is an AMAZING story. I love your characters and your writing style. =D

Please update soon? *offers virtual bribe cookies* xD

XDD Manny makes me laugh every time! xD

M, Manny's gonna get in trouble, lol. <3



OK

After fighting fanfiction to log in and actually REVIEW, here I am!! =DD


I'm not sure about the quotation marks but put it in Microsoft Word and it should underline in green all the stuff that's messed up. >>; Other than that, I don't really know.

And GET'IM MANNY! Rawr! Lawl, I love this story so much.

*squeals in chair* Oh this is so much better then that Stephanie Meyer chick, at least he's cool about spying on people and sneaking into their rooms! =_=

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Ew the quotes got messed up?! That sucks!! Lol. I wish you wouldn't wait a week because I love this story. How you got the tactic the cops were using was a good idea, a lot of people over look how cops do do things sometimes. =/

And my heart freaked out when I read he was in the window, I'm like "HES BACK TO TAKE YOUR SOULL!" (Princess Bride reference, ^-^;; )

Anyways, I didn't see any grammar errors which is amazing, and I hope that /maybe/, if I hope enough, the updates might come faster...? xD

AND WOOT FOR FIRST REVIEW ON CHAPTER ONE AND TWO! Ha!

And I don't even know this series. ^_^






Katie

I am SO going to wait every single day for this story! =0 It's friggin amazing is what it is!