Oh...my. This was actually very good. You did a spledid job on this story, well so far that is :)
You got the people (bots) charaters down perfectly, I can't wait for the charaters to get even more involved.
I can tell that this is going to be a very...appealing story.
I can't wait for the next chapter to come!

Great chapter keep it up. ^_^

You probably can't find Italian names beginning with "J" because the language is so very close to Latin where the "J" is replaced by the "I". You could have gone for names starting with "G" possibly (in trying to rename Jetfire?).

I swear, you have to be triplets... you're way too talented to be just one person!

Gyah! You gotta update! ^_^ Meow!

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WOW! WHOA! DAMN! YA! Talk about an AWESOME first chapter! Thank you so much for coming back with another one so quickly! Only, now I'm left wanting even more, hehe. And it's so long and detailed and, did I mention awesome? Hehe. I am HOOKED! I can understand why it's hard to remember their names. But you have done such a brilliant job of this chapter!

I loved the part with (can I use their TF names?) Don and Lita. I was sighing and giggling at their banter and wit. His interaction and fondness for Clara was really sweet too. And I was grinning the instant she ran to the window and tosses aside the 'Girlie' mask. And who wouldn't fall in love with Benny?! Dear God he's so damn adorable! I wants him!

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And Savino! Girl, you have got such a wicked story going for you here, it's crazy! Savino is FUN! He's like the most chilled out and laid back Grandfather in the world. And the fact he doesn't expect Clara to be acting all the time around him is really cool. The more people she can be herself around, the less of the pressure.

It's amazing how they all dote on her so much!

OMG! I nearly forgot about the beginning with Icilio and Raffele! Talk about drinking away his sorrows. Not that I can blame him. But it was just...so perfect! Ack, I loved this line! - “Claricci? Good God, man, if you’re making up nicknames then this could be worse than I’d feared.” I'm totally giggling at that! Poor Icilio! Although, judging from the last part that had the hopeless romantic in me sighing and swooning...I can't see him drinking his sorrows away again. :D

I hope I've said everything I can possible think of. Trust me, I would love to go into huge, mondo amounts of detail and tell you all the witty and funny parts that made me laugh. But time is being a ** to me lately. So I hope this will do. Me absolutely loves it! GREAT job! I hope there's more soon. :) Take care! Have a good weekend.

Wow, this is wonderful!! I'm gonna have to learn Italian to keep up, but it's very cute =) I esp love the interactions between Clara and Icilio...he is so gonna get himself in hot water over this, but well worth it!

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Wow, this sounds like a very interesting start!! I had to giggle about Stefano...poor Melchiorre gets stuck with him as his only son! And Clara as one of Primo's kids...with Raffele helping to fend off Icilio with a gun! Eager to see how this plays out =)

Man,this seems interesting!
And those names *holding my laugh* they're so hilarious! XD
Can't wait for the next chapter!

This I am definitely looking forward to! You've got an awesome idea here, it's going to be wicked! More soon please. :D

I like the sound of this. can't wait for next chapter. :)