er...i have to agree with one of your reviewers (honey, was it?) that this isn't crack but it's definitely good extra-mini-fic material! I like that you're experimenting around with different characters here to make your main project even better ^^ It's a good idea. hmm... i guess i should also add that the flame-thingy one of the anons on here threw at you is...pitiful to say the least, seeing as he/she either can't or didn't bother to spell 'identities' correctly (it's rubbish for other glaringly obvious reasons as well, but i'd rather not take the required time/space to mention them)...so don't feel bad about it! You're quite the writer and i do hope you'll update Goal soon - there are so few fem-sena fics around, and you're one of the few that has the skills and originality to make it work...

Cool to hear!

Wow , I've been waiting for this one !
This one is fantastic !
Another updates please ...!

Hate to be rude but this sure as heck ain't Crack. You might want to look it up.

That's Shin for you, he doesn't understand and yet he does.

I like how it sounds like a thought process.

Oh, Riku is SO not going to like that!

And the previous chapter, about the team, I really loved it. Team-bonding is so sweet with those guys cos they don't do anything special, it just clicks.

No worries about the OOC part. He's pretty IC to me for supposedly liking Sena-chan. 8D I love KidxSena (along with... half of other Sena pairings =w=) and it makes me melt to see something fluffy like this. XD

This isn't crack, its one sided love.

Crack is when you have Hiruma being completely OOC and making out with Gaou in front of Shin (who is somehow jellous) while everyone else is laughing or being silly.

Otawara being pantless is a must.

Crack is basically total OOCness surrounding something on the parts of all characters.

Anyways, I find it cute.

this one thing I look forward to seeing in your Goal fic; sena-chan's family-relationship with the devil bats,esp. guys like Jyuumonji

Cute.

Your last line is so true! And yes, I'm a fan of Kakkei too - it's the eyes, I swear, I love brunettes with blue eyes. So sexy...

aw,agree with you there,fem-sena/kakei is such a cute pair,what with her shyness and small height and his stoicness and giant height,I can just picture Mizumachi saying how adorable they look,..seriously love your fem-sena stuff

Hm,ooh I know,the meeting with Maria,the Dinosaurs' manager,that'd be cute and funny,each of them thinking the other had set up a dateXD

Cute.

Kakei and Sena are cute! I like this chapter a lot, I hope you'll update Goal soon!