An extremely amusing idea, I enjoyed reading it very much. Perhaps you could write a sequel? Do not be so hasty to put a "Complete" label on this story, it has a great potential :)

I hope you continue this story because I like it. It's so different that it draws you in.

*teehee* Just as amusing as the first time I read it. John's a persistent guy. :)

This is too cute. Love this idea.

This is terrific and I hope to read more soon!! Very clever!!

I love this! I hope we get to see a little bit more of this universe.

Is there ever enough elf-John or pixie-Teyla fics out there? The only thing "wrong" with your story is that it definitely needs to be longer!This was a delightful introduction; now please,write more?!

Is there going to be more to this? Or are you done with it?

Yes, a crackfic section would be awesome. This looks like it was a hoot to write. Mayhap there is more?