Update please... I wanna find out what happens next...

I like this story, why haven't you updated?

Let me know whether or not you plan on finishing this story. It's really good.

Love the descriptions, and you have an interesting take on Clark's bad side. I also love what you did with Lex; giving him a family and making him protective of it. I'm looking forward to Lex's resistance against Clark's tyranny and finding out if Clark will ever be good again.

- Kari Anna

eep! I love it! MORE MORE MORE

Holy crap! That's all I can say. When I read the summary, I thought, "Hey, this'll be interesting," but it was so much more! Lex, his family, the kryptonite, and the homicidal Superman was over-the-top brilliance. And Pete, at the end, seriously took my breath away. I was gaping at the computer screen like an ass, but it was worth it. Wow.

Love the story! Love how Lex call's his wife Lor to! It's like I'm his wife. Well anywho keep up the writings.

Fascinating and very original take on the material. It's an impressive and frightening new reality you've created. Your style is very nice - lyrical. Keep up the good work.

This is such a painfully tragic 'What if..?'. I love that Lex has found a family and security. The possibility of Clark turning evil is horrifying... and knowing how sweet and loving he was makes it worse. Good bit of writing, can't wait to see more.

This was such a great first chapter! Even in DC canon, Lex's family has always been a weak spot for him - it used to be his sister, Lena, and now it's his daughter, also named Lena. I hope there'll be more of this soon!