Amazing. Completely amazing. It's so flowing and creative. I cannot sing enough praise for your work! This is truely why one tries to write fanfiction. To get to your level.

I won't lie and say at times I wasn't confused at some of the wording, but nonetheless this was a beautiful one-shot.

It's a good thing I have another 35 stories that I have to read. :)

venus the oracle.

That was so deep! I loved the way you wrote. U rock!

Very well written. I got slightly confused, but nonetheless, I cried at a point because it was so darn well written! Congrats on a beautiful tale

This is such a beautiful Christmas story… deep… thoughtful… warm in the end, but not sappy… flowing smoothly … always in character. I really love this, so keep up the wonderful writing!