This story is so cute.I hope you keep going

Hey! Write! You owe it to us to ATLEAST finish this! C'mon! It is sooooo good! It seriously is.

Your last chapter had a reference to its kind of a funny story didn't it? Nice!

awesomeeeee

Welcome back. I just discovered your story and am you are going to finish it. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us. Looking forward to more.

oh my gosh you've awakened. i saw all things in my inbox and was blinded because it was too much white. but yeah. this was a cute chapter :)

Another great chapter I loved it

aww bless little edward hope he gets to see soon

Hi hmm well I wuz really bord nd well I saw ur story caught mi interest nd iread it its good I like it hm well I hope u write soon nd I feel u life is hard 4rm time 2 time nd there's prob so dnt sweat it so thanks 4 a cute lil story

-Angie

YAY! I cant wait for you to put up another chapter . By the way love the story so far .

i love that show too best old show everrrrrr upadate soon pleasseeee

sownd really cool and please up date on this story

Λοιπόν μην σπαταλάς τόσο χρονο στα παιδικά τους χρόνια προσπέρνα μερικά και γράψε μόνο για τις στιγμές που πηγαίνουν τη σχέση τους σε άλλο επίπεδο. Και για το θεό πια, δεν είναι ανάγκη να έχεις χάσει τη παρθενιά σου για να γράψεις ερωτική σκηνή, στον εικοστό πρώτο αιώνα είμαστε όχι στο δέκατο όγδοο. Μου αρέσει η πλοκή και περιμένω ακόμα καλύτερα κεφάλαια.

hahaha perfect as a Ken doll nice

WHAT? why'd you end it there? its good but could you make longer chapters?