 Shain-The Otaku-of Ireland 4/29/11 . chapter 10When oh when are you going to update this? I loved the first story and now you keep me hanging with the sequel? Oh you are so cruel to your readers. *Pout*
Seriously though, I hope you haven't forgotten about this story. It was getting very interesting. I was really looking forward to Marianna's interactions around the castle as well as seeing how well Yozak and Conrad, and Gwendal and Gunter can patch things up when there is clearly some lingering hurt and doubt between them all (I mean, Gunter still blames himself for his husband's infidelity and now he has to deal with his husband's love child throwing her obvious dislike of him in his face as she tries to get close to her father?...yikes!)I desperately want to read more and that becomes a bit of a complication when you don't...well...write more. Oh the conundrum! |
 KKM-Fan-Girl 5/21/09 . chapter 9I hope you update soon, I have been waiting and waiting and am about to explode! hehe Hope you are feeling better. |
 yilun 4/30/09 . chapter 9Now that you've mentioned that Wolf & Yuuri, NOT getting married coz of Yozak, I'll like to see what's your take on them. I'm also looking forward to see the interaction btw the brat & rest of the castle's occupant.
I feel sad that Yozak & Conrad are like "forlorn" lovers, desperate BUT not saying anything. Seems almost pitiful. Well, I trust you'll do something about those two.
Short but enough to get excited for the next chapter. Hope you recover soon on whatever is making you sick! |
 Shakuya 4/26/09 . chapter 8aw I love when Gwendal taught his daughter like that XD thanks for it! love them! hahahahaha! so when you'll come back to the main topic, then? Hope it'll be soon! I'm curious about it hahaha update soon!
ReI |
 yilun 4/26/09 . chapter 8Hmm...I agree with Shinou & Murata, running away & keeping everything a secret wasn't the best thing to do esp. at the end when it seems so clear that Gwendal although playing the "teaching" father's role had clearly missed out on the 15 years of his daughter's life.
I like the you've written Gwendal in this chapter & I can't help feelling so sad for him when Marianna seemed to realise that he was the saddest in this "affair".
Good chapter. Thank you |
 Shain-The Otaku-of Ireland 4/24/09 . chapter 7Hey there! I must say you are doing great in this sequel so far. I whole-heartedly approve! And thank you for responding so quickly to my last review!
Just want to pick your brain again:
It's been 15 years...what is the deal with Yuuri and Wolfram's engagement? Are they still engaged? Are they Married? Broken up? (hope not). I'm curious since in the first story Wolfram was all soft and fuzzy...in his own way, about the baby, and it was weirding Yuuri out. Just thought I would ask.
I'm assuming, like any stubborn, conflicted child her age, Marianna is completely ignoring Yozaks genuine love for Conrad in favor of her own hopes that her birth father will marry Yozak and make her family finally whole? Because she seems pretty keen on hating the one man(Conrad) who makes her dad(Yozak) really happy.
Anyway, keep up the good work with this story! |
 Shakuya 4/24/09 . chapter 7Hai Hai It's okay of your 'not-fast-as-usual' update... I think you're great of updated almost everyday! ) I like this chapter too! But...ah...well... to be honest... I don't really like Marriana's acts like that... T-T Thought Gwendal's temper could be hidden and controlled,,... hahahaha I want to see how will Gwendal hang about his daughter's act, thought... Update soon! ) |
 yilun 4/24/09 . chapter 7Marianna's going through the whole angsty teenage thing isn't she? Her refusal to acknowledge Conrad & even challenge his position in Yozak's life is going to be painful for everyone esp. Yozak. Well, I like this chapter that sees Conrad & Yozak starting to move towards each other & hopefully ther's some sort of "happy ending"
I like the way you've described Conrad's demeanour by Yozak who cannot understand how Conrad can plaster his smiles at the most inappropriate moments be they for good or not. This is exactly how I feel too.
Good chapter! thank you |
 shellbell33 4/24/09 . chapter 7yozak needs to put miss brat over his knee and spank her good. I LOVE it
romantic kissing and then interrupting from angry daughter. What a good chapter I enjoyed it so?
ANd the sword play between Conrad and Marianna. We all knew what was going to happen. And it seemed to make things worse. But in the end I know Marianna is gonna be kicking herself in the ass for how she treats Conrad and Gunter ;) |
 KKM-Fan-Girl 4/23/09 . chapter 6First off let me apologise for not reviewing like I usally do, sick kids cut down on my reading time :(
I just wanted to say that just like the last fanfic, I love this one aswell, especally her attitude tword Gunter.
If you are taking suggestions *wink* I think it would be kind of neat for something to happen that brings her closer to either Conrad or Gunter (my fav is Conrad though) like an attack and he/he saves her or w/e.
Keep up the great work and update soon :) |
 shellbell33 4/21/09 . chapter 6man you're gonna give them heart attacks LOL. The story is so good and there goes Murata meddling again. And Yuri as well.
Gwendal and Yozak gotta realize that they can't stop her from growing up. It was bound to happen sooner or later.
So what about a scene with Yozak and Conrad getting really snuggly and little daughter dearest catch them. Go all bratty on Conrad.
*looks around* What! It's all clean and fashion good angst. |
 Shakuya 4/21/09 . chapter 6Hello! Hello! sorry for not reviewed your story before well have a busy time here sorry... *bows* but this chappie is good! how protective are the parent hahahaha update soon! I'm waiting here! |
 yilun 4/20/09 . chapter 6So Conrad & Gwendal made up. That 's good. It seems almost justified that Yozak left! Well, another development is the one of young love btw Marianna & El. That sure is going to get the 2 fathers up in arms!
waiting for your next update & thanks for the chapter. |
 story reader 4/18/09 . chapter 5 Oh wow! Our little El's all grown up! Is Gisella going to be making an appearance anytime soon? Will Yozak sing at any point in this fic? Eagerly awaiting the next chapter, you've never really disappointed me with the results! |
 Shakuya 4/17/09 . chapter 5Please don't really explain about the age I'm confused when read it (a 13 years old girl) But nice chappie Anyway... because you want to accept request I want to read about Yuuri! maybe when Marriana met him or what about SHinou? some author said in their story that Shinou love children? It'll be nice... about Daikenja too... sorry if I request too munch! *bows* Well hope you would update soon! Love your story! |