Great story! I loved your take on Hermione - the scientific wording thing was so very her! And it was so fluffy and sweet. Nice job!

Aw, cute. Nice to see you're updating again. I really like your style. I understand what you mean about the last paragraph. But hay, it was a nice ending. I don't think it was rushed anyway.

Keep updating.
LostLyra

Leave it to Hermione to use a lofty word to describe Ron than to just say "chicken" or "has cold feet." But that's why we all love her. :D

And great job!

Also, "Yes! A thousand times, yes!" is one of my favorite quotes from the Keira Knightley Pride and Prejudice. Jane's the one who actually says it, not Elizabeth, but what the heck. I love that line anyway.

Write some more soon!

Aw, another one! Yay! I really do need to start finishing up and posting my HP stuff. And you really need to write something for me! lol. Just had enough time to read this before work, so I'm glad it was a bit short, but your next one definitely needs to be longer! Great job and hope to read something new soon!

It was very interesting to see the juxtaposition of Hermione's very (understandably) intense emotions regarding marriage and the pregnancy with her very logical approach to fears and irrationality. I quite enjoyed this.

Loved it. It was really sweet, but I hope Ron didn't propose just because Hermione was pregnant! Of course, he loves her, but if he wasn't planning to propose anytime soon, it would be quite bad.