At first I thought it was going to be kind of silly reading something based off of "Love Story" seeing as that song is based on Shakespeare (obviously ^^') and it'd be like reading something second-secondhand, however I was pleasantly surprised! And! EdWin ftw.

Consise, to the point, and well thought out writing, good job. The song is gorgeous, too. Thumbs up! Thanks!

-Vengeance

Aw! That's such a sweet story! Really really sweet :D

This was actually much better than I thought it could be. Excellent job. I love how you took the actual song idea and intergrated it flawlessly into the FMA plotline (even if you did change the plot some, which is what fanfiction is for right?).

Overall, wonderful job!

Happy Writing!
EdElricFan1001

Aw, that was so sweet. A different and refreshing EdWin, and totally sweet and doesn't need tenloads of angst or corruption of mention of sex and booze and drugs to be awesome. 8D

*Adds to Mechanical Passion C2*

x3 I loved it.