Awesome... I'd say continue writing but it would ruin the essence of this piece.
It's like a prelude of sorts.
Great job!
^_^
This kind of gave me and idea for a fic so thank you for inspiring me! xD

It's good but it feels a little incomplete. It ended really abruptly. leaving it up to other's imagination is always nice, but i was kinda hoping it would last longer. heh, I didn't look at the # of words on when I clicked it. I know I'm selfish, but maybe you'll write a sequel or add more on later?

Very well written :)

Nice. It's short, but good. :)

awesome

Wow! That was awsome! Please keep writing more stuff!

Awesome~!! I think you nailed it~!! XD