him?

This retelling of 'Twilight' from Edward's perspective with the slash twist looks interesting...are you going to continue with the story?

BTW: I like that Isadore is no 'shrinking violet' and speaks his mind.

I found your telling of Edward's change a good one - the combination of interested detachment and wonder.

Also, I like how you gave no hint to who he changed...just that hint at the end that it would be different than 'Twilight'.

that was cool :)

That was a great first chapter :)

really cool idea, the name isadore is growing on me...kinda
well writen!

Love this idea. I like that the name is so similar to Isabella. I really like his smart ass remarks too. "Do I have two heads?" Freakin' funny.

I like this start and want to know more.

Damn. Bella's a guy? Edward's gay?
interesting concept...
What's his nickname? "Dore"? =s

That doesn't really make sense...well...update soon...

oKay like this so far found you on twilighted and hm interesting plot idea...i hope someone writes this idea from the boybella pov not that edwards in your story is bad...i like it

wants to read more :P

WOW. really like this so far. please update soon, I would love to see how this plays out.

This is really interesting. I can't wait to see how everything is going to play out!

It's totally awesome!
Can't really think of anything wrong with it...
update soon

Isadore what a interesting name, I notice he called edward hot so he is interested that is good. great chapter.

intriging begining make me want to read more.