u should do an after aswell

HA! I love it!

Oh, this was precious. I love girl talk. hehehehe You never fail to amuse us, and yet Sam and Vala talking about their so could wantant men is typical when there is only a one sided thoughts on wanting what you can't have, well yet anyway. Sam and Vala are so alike, and yet they see relationships in so many different venues. So finally dealing with their situation, they take matters into their own hands, and at the end of the day, the very two they were thinking about get clobbered in the end. Such a fitting end. hehehe :D

Haha! That's cute. I know you said it's a one shot, but I definitely think a sequel would work if you wanted to write one...

LOL! Guess all that's left is for the girls to drag the guys back to their cave. The guys really should know better than to sneak up on the girls. Oh well at least Jack can still tease Daniel about being knocked out. ;)

cute. i do love reading your work
:D sam

*snort* that was a complete riot! What a hoot! Sam and Vala snark, banter, and humor. Loved the ending. Poor baby's. If their women folk don't want them I'll have them. More please - C!

Bwahahahaha! Dorks! The boys really should have announced themselves.

I know you said it's a oneshot, but I'm dying to know what happens next. ;-)

Too funny! I loved it! --EarthBug

Opps

I finished this story the way I usually finish your humour stories: with a peel of laughter. Vala's last line cracked me up.

Loved her and Sam's little discussion, and nice touch on having them enjoy a heart-to-heart without one of the being concussed, shot, bleeding or otherwise half-dead! :P(as seems to be the norm hehe)

Oh, and Daniel's obviously having a good influence on Vala, at least in the domain of literary references! :D Although I would rather think of him as her albatross, rather than the other way around.

And lastly :D the idea of number three going missing is just as hilarious the second time around!

Great story!
Hugs,
Myosotis

hhahaahahahaha

More please! I want to know how Vala and Sam ended up where they did and what happened afterwards. As it is I love it but more would be nice...

*gigglesnort* That was hilarious! I love the hand signals thing. I can just picture that...lmao! Poor Vala, thinking she doesn't have a chance. Daniel fully deserved that beating up! :P

*giggles* I don't know why, but when ever I read a fic where Daniel or Jack get hurt in some crazy way (or by two crazy women) I go: Serves them right! Though, I don't think Jack did deserve it this time, but it's for the future. ;) Loved it.