 Sam Carter McKay 2009-11-03 . chapter 18Nigel/Kate is my favorite pairing. It's all too rare.
I'm glad to see you have written it.
The story is pretty good, I hope you continue to post updates. I'm headed to your other story to read it now! |
 Xtraordinary 2009-08-07 . chapter 18Lieutenant? Is Steve a lieutenat or something? Anyway Awesome chapter! So glad you updated! Hurry with the next chapter! :P |
 Amelia Bianca Black 2009-08-03 . chapter 17It doesn't matter that it's short. Not when it tells us so much about Christine. You did well with the snippets from her diary. I'm liking her more and more.
I like the beginning too; it made me smile. Who'd think that K.A.K. is so afraid of bugs? :) (I completely understand her, btw.) |
 Xtraordinary 2009-08-01 . chapter 17Awesome! A bit short but it was still awesome! Man I have no idea what's going to happen next. Really excited to find out though!Anyway keep it up! =D |
 Xtraordinary 2009-07-24 . chapter 16Good cliffhanger. Another great chapter! I really liked the poem. I can't wait to find out what's in the hole! Update soon! =D |
 Amelia Bianca Black 2009-07-22 . chapter 16Nice cliffhanger! :) I hope you'll update soon.
I love the beginning with Kate and Nigel because you can just see how their relationship is progressing. It's also nice to see how the gang is trying to show Kate she's one of them now.
The second part of the chapter is interesting too. Christine's stories are intriguing, and I like it how we're gradually getting to know her better.
Just one little thing, if I may, 'cause I needed to reread the sentence to get it right. "Opening the door and squeezing herself with all of her bags through the doorway, there was Nigel, finishing up his book." This way it looks like Nigel's performing all the actions mentioned in the sentence. ;) |
 Amelia Bianca Black 2009-07-13 . chapter 10It's been a while since I last read this story, so I'll have a lot to catch up with. I'll also have to review everything at once (and I hate doing that) - my browser's been giving me trouble today, everything takes forever to load and I've constantly being logged out, which is far worse.
I'll start with chapter ten. :)
Dang it! I totally forgot that Kate lived in NY *then*. This is a very emotional chapter. I especially like the part when Nigel meets Rebecca and Emi. It's touching how much they all care for Kate.
Then, "Nigel was laying on the bed, but not *his* bed." Eh, poor Kate; I imagine that was a shocker. :) I also liked this one: "Sherlock Holmes would be proud." Heh, Nige's an Englishman, after all. And a gentleman. :) Poor K.A.K. I bet she'd like to kick Nige's ** right now. :) Liked this chapter too, now off to Chapter Twelve...
You gotta love Kate and Nige and their bickering. You gotta love Stiles too. :) The ending is great, even if it's pretty sad that Kate's thinking like that. Oh yeah, it's good to hear Jake will be fine.
I have to admit I didn't expect Chapter Thirteen to begin like it did. That was quite a fight. They're both too stubborn to even try to see things from the other one's point of view, I guess. But they will make up, right? Pretty please? :) But before that... Kate's going on a blind date! She actually let somebody arrange a date for her? I wonder what that will go like...
Ooh, me likey! I love Lily, Nigel's description of Austen, Kate's description of Austen, Kate speaking French, Jordan and Woody eavesdropping, but most of all... Kate and Nigel. That's so sweet. :) And the ending - great.
Okay, so Chapter Fifteen now. :) Well, Steve definitely got " a second tr-". Just deserts, if you ask me. :) I think you did very well with the game. Of course, I'm not an expert - it's just that it read interestingly to me. And it looked like the games my dad used to bring me to (he used to play soccer and hoped to get me interested, but obviously failed :)). Once again - great ending.
I hope you'll update soon. :) And I truly apologize for cramming all this into a single review. |
 Xtraordinary 2009-07-12 . chapter 15Awesome! I think you did an awesome job on this chapter. Especially for someone who doesnt know much about soccer. Can't wait for the next! =D |
 Xtraordinary 2009-06-30 . chapter 14Ohh myy godd! I think this is my favorite chapter yet! I loved the whole thing with Woody and Jordan outside the door! "Do you think she killed him or something?" lol! I loved the part about how she didn't perfect and how it is boring too. I totally agree with that! awesome chapter! love it! Update soon! =D |
 Xtraordinary 2009-06-25 . chapter 13oh! whos this guys she's going out with!? Can't wait to see how her date goes! I liked the part with Woody and his coffee and that Bruce dude sounds like a pretty awesome guy! Anyway still loving it and looking forward to the next chapter! |
 Spotlesssky 2009-06-21 . chapter 11lol kick ** kate, this name suits her well! |
 Xtraordinary 2009-06-19 . chapter 12Yay! The Jake dude is alright! Loved the beginning. The cab driver dude rocked! Awesome chapter! Update soon! ^_^ |
 Xtraordinary 2009-06-16 . chapter 11Oh my god! I love this chapter! I hope he goes to the championships! That would be too awesome! Update soon! |
 Amelia Bianca Black 2009-06-01 . chapter 9"Kate wondered why he would leave a note." :)
The park scene is beautiful. You and Casey make me want to start writing Kate/Nigel.
I hope Nige's friend will make it. I also hope we'll find out more about Christine soon. :) |
 Amelia Bianca Black 2009-06-01 . chapter 7I liked the bar fight. The way it's written, I mean. :))
You did a great job with this flashback/dream. There are some really strong emotions there, but you didn't make the entire thing sappy.
I'm really enjoying this story. |