OK, I liked the story line at first, but Daytime Soap Operas don't have such dramatic personality swings.

From a victim of serious bullying: 'I tease you because I like you' may work in kindergarten, but physical assault and emotional abuse is not repented and forgiven in less than a day. Bullying is a serious issue, so if you're going to write about it, give it the realism that it deserves.

Um, he helped drive her to suicide, and it's all "oh, you didn't mean it, you're forgiven"?

Even Bella isn't that much of a pushover, at least not without some serious begging.

I know what it's like. When your depressed all you feel like doing nothing and just lay there cry a little to maybe. I've had it for about 3 years now and my doctor wants me to go on anti-depressants but my mom told him no, it got so bad i started to think about suicide. i'm not making this up but otherwise amazing story

cool story
please keep righting

Its a good story line but re-doing it would be good so edward and bella have time to fall in love. I likes it.

great story but quit the authors notes

I know how hard depression is. But remember, if you feel down in life, you have a bunch of fans who still love you.

:D

okay, fine by me!!

hm idk bout this story kinda idk... hm

i know that rosalie can be cruel but not alice anyways i would have changed this by bella getting a bf and edward getting jeslous

Updates!

OMG! I'm in tears right now.

i like this story it is good continue with it

dont forgive him!think about it if someone bullied you so much you wanted to commit suicide would u forgive them if they said sos?!

more please! you should write more soon, and now i will hug-tackle you *hug-tackle you and then stand up and grins at you insisting you wear a pink t-shirt that says 'i will post soon, or else Moka will murder me'*

love, Moka!