I like this more than version 1.

I can't judge its Fairy!Sue-ishness yet, as only one chapter's out, but I would say that changing your character's name might be a good idea. People see Draena, and they see your authorname, and they get suspicious . . .

:P

its cool! keep going please!

That's a very interesting story I really like it so far.

it's great so far keep writeing =)

I Just read your first version before this one and I have to say I think I like this version better. keep up the work

It's good, but you forgot some periods.