Can I finsh the story then? PLEASE?!?!?! I just was inspired, and if not can I base my story off of yours?

Well its not that bad. But why make it so short?

don't make the chapters too short. also, make the meetings more meaningful. And don't use script format; it might get removed. Honestly, i don't mind scirpts, but it's in the guidelines: must be story format. It's also a little confusing. I'm sorry if you feel i'm insulting this story, but i've been planning on making a Sonic/Chowder crossover, and now that i've seen someone's attampting it, i don't want it to be removed and i want this to be good, and also helped me with my own writing skills, so maybe this'll halp keep your story well-received. btw, Amy and Panini teaming up to get Sonic and Chowder respectively is kind of expected, but a good idea. don't mess it up!

Oh, also, one more thing: the line of "raddah"s is actually "share a big peice with everyone" i found that cool when i looked it up!

you take the moon and you take the sun
you take everything that seems like fun
you stir it up and then your done
rada rada rada rada rada rada
so come on in feel free to do some lookin
and stay a while cause somethings always cookin
so come on in feel free to do some lookin
and stay a while cause somethings always cookin, YEAH!