Luv it! I totally agree with u about this. Maybe you could write a fic where Asfur DOES have kits with Squirrelflight, like a crack pairing, ya know? PS- It was Hollyleaf that killed poor old Ashy, not Firestar. Awesome stuff-please add on!

I'm... I'm shocked actually. I mean, even in a fanfic, I never expected someone to put Firestar as Ashfur's murderer. Wow. Makes me think a little, now.

On offence, but it was Hollyleaf who killed him & how did Firestar know anyways? Awsome story though.

I like your opinion. It's logical and it makes perfect sense. I wish it was how things really played out, though...

Amazing work, Bluey!

Peace!

I loved it! I'm so tired of Ashfur being called a trator, so tired of defending him, this story struck me hard. I'm writing a fanfic called "Ashfurs Life", and when I get to him dieing, do you mind if I copy and paist this onto it? And yes, it would be awesome if it was Firestar who had killed Ashfur. One more thing, I don't cry, I haven't cryed from a story in five years, but this story got to me. Thank you for writing this. This is the most reasonable story I've read about Ashfur in a really long time

FireStar wanst the one who killed AshFur (ive read Sunrise), but i thought it was either him, SandStorm (hunter's kill) or LionBlaze. But it was HollyLeaf in the end.

I did not see that coming, Bluey. I thought that Spiderleg murdered Ashfur, but, ah well. It was a very good oneshot, and I liked it a lot. I always liked Ashfur.