good job.
maybe you should continue on their life after...?

Nice, a little short, but good idea. I was dissapointed Gray died; it felt like so many of the characters made it so far, then just died, so quickly. Well written, sweet. And Mandy O'Brien summed it up for me too: "didn't weant to see Gray die...but **really** didn't want to see Neil die!"

sweet - not too fluffy either. cool, and you can imagine it happening in the film!

It was short and it was good

(I have to admit, the original ending wasn't the greatest thing ever, but I did greatly enjoy the movie.)

Now your ending... 'Tis not bad. I admit, I didn't want to see Gray die. (Then again, I *really* didn't want to see Neil die, either!) It would have been nice to see them all come back...

I think the story was great! I think that other people suck! If they don't like it, SCREW EM! Well, I gotta go and talk to you in a second! Ja ne!

WPY

Okay, in order to reply to Anonymous who said I fucked my mother. First of all, that is just disgusting, and if you really had balls and were a true critic, then you would have SIGNED, you pussy. Don't fuck with me. I am very supportive of other people's work. I take into consideration their creative abilities...unlike Mr. Anonymous. Well, to you, you are a mother fucker, and may god have mercy on your poor mother. For the other people that review and don't say that I fuck my mother, I appreciate your opinions. Thank you. Review, even if you don't think it's the best thing in the world, which it definitely isn't. :) Thanks for your opinion, except for Mr. Anonymous Mother-Fucker. I have your X-mas present: a one-way ticked to Afghanistan. Hope you enjoy your stay. It's on me. But, I'm sure that other authors would appreciate it too. :) In the words of my uncle, Bruce, "We're all gonna die, but some need to go sooner!"

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Meilin Rae

Mmmm... It is a nice idea in theory, but.. Not for me. I suppose I could be called a Hypocrite here *been editing the story myself*, but even then I like the orginal ending best.

Don't be discouraged though, I'm sure some people would prefer this ending. And I think it's well written.