Wonderful!

I love Tyki (though not Tyki/Lavi :S ) and you did him justice with what you wrote about him and his thoughts. I think it makes sense that the Noah won, since it is his most dominant part even if he doesn't realize it ^^

Very good job on this one, short but very good :)

This is really awesome.^_^
I had no clue what was going on in the last chapter...but it kinda makes more sense after reading this. I really like your interpretation ot it. =)

dgm last chapter really confused me.>C

i thought tyki smashed the glass becuase he could see his noah.
and with that question going un anwsered.i was worrying. kind of going through the "no~~ we can't lose tyki! D:"
and with the earl saying he's finally awoken.i thought he was going through the turning into his full noah stage.(like skin)

but your fic made me think alot more things.like how road got cut.and that he might be turning into a human.
but i'm still questioning myself.D:

really good i love it XD

This is a really good fic. I love your interpretation of what's going on with Tyki.

I love you for making this scene. D:
So many of Hoshino's chapters have been inspiring me lately (Lulz: Allen referring to Link as a piece of furniture spawned kinky thoughts) but you got to this first! xD It's amazing though, to hope that maybe, just maybe he's succumbing to his humanity.
But all his human friends... D: I hope they're not killed... Argh. And it's interesting, the way you interpreted a lot of the imagery just from those four panels. ^^ It shocked the hell out of me, seeing Road cut all over, but yeah, I guess you're right in saying that maybe it's not even her real body that Tyki was sparring with.
And redheaded exorcist- bwaahaha. >D
But I'd thought the Noah in the glass was the Fourteenth, but holy crap, you're probably right in seeing that as the Pleasure! Because they look nothing alike, haha, and why would the Fourteenth be hovering over Tyki when he has a now-gorgeous nephew to stalk instead? xD
That was an awesome story, and thank you so much for writing it!!

thanks God i read the last chapter before read your fic or i wouldn't understand nothing. i really like the last chapter, even if i didn't understand some things: for example the part with Tyki and Road. for this motive i really appreciate your fic. i think it could be a really good explanation! (but for me the Noah won't won in the end. nobody want to loose the Tyki we all know...).
anyway really good job! (and also really fast!)

PS: i also hope Lavi will be in the next chapter. i'm in abstinence!! i want to see him!
PPSS: 'whispering'...thanks for the hint...you know what i'm talking about...

Wow...you work fast. I rarely see anyone who can write a fic based on the latest chapter and submit on the same day the scans come out.

I could see that you were trying to make Tyki turn human in the first half of the fic, but you changed your mind at the end?