"But Victor was a sentient, not a minion. He was counting . . . but by tens." I cracked up in my empty room at 12:30 am. This line was hilarious

Lol, I love Adam, he's so sweet! And funny! :)

Victor really is an opportunist, and Adam as Queen - well, I knew him from other stories, and I adore him!

Yeah, we all knew, but it was still so much fun to read. Wonderful chapter!
The Queens attacking the other in midair made me think of one of my favourite Vampire films, the Lost Boys!

This chapter was so incredibly funny! Does he turn gay wizards on as well`?
Love your style, and can't wait to see with what wonderful ideas you will come up with next!

Great story.

You could totally sell your stuff as uh adult books. youd get rich quick.

nice writing. one of the few times ive read a fic that had a lot of sex AND a plot that works with it, most usually just have pointless sex. You kept true to the characters 99% of the time too, just can't really say what snapes sex life is like considering jkr never mentioned that, but i would sure hope its like this!

Good writing, couldn't "put the book down" as they say.

You use Victor and Adam a lot in stories now... They are possibly my favorite pair of gay OC/OC characters ever. I read this to figure out how it all happened, originally. xDD Loved it!

omg, i love adam, hes just soo annoyingly desperate you dont know if you should laugh at him or kill him!!

i love adam..lol
i'd want to take him home but im afraid he'd harrass my brothers... i have a brother that looks like snape...unfortunately hes related to me...:( of all the friggen rotten luck.

ive studied to become a paramedic and a medical assistant...do you think if i study a little harder i could examine him? lol I liked this chapter, but unfortuntly the only nakedness i see, is when i change an adult diaper. and that does not even closely relate to this situation. :(

i love bats... but even vampire bats dont like humans. infact they usually take blood from sleeping livestock or ocassionally dogs...but not often. they fear humans as much as humans fear them. the only flying creature i have ever seen attack a human is a mocking bird.
this was a great fist chapter.

Aw i dont want it to be over yet ::sighs in defeat:: loved the pairing, loved Adam, loved that it had vampires in, loved the story, lol loved just about everything i think i am quickly becoming your biggest fan if you wrote your own book or books i would definatly buy them I think i have read just about every fan fic you have made lol keep um coming I realy must get started on writing my own ::says as afterthought::

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XxWeAloveSevxX

Hi

I just wanted to tell you, I read "Twice Bitten" aswell...^^

I liked it. I was a bit disappointed at first when he recovered so quickly, but then it only started to get really interesting...^^

Lydia

Ah, it was fun.
I was wondering whether you would make both Severus and Hermione into vampires but then you found another solution. Though I wouldn't have minded that ending either... Oh well, perhaps another time...^^

You're fan ;)

Lydia