|Reviews for School Rivals|
| iSmile9t5 7/5/10 . chapter 2
can't wait to read the rest :) !
| alybieber 5/8/10 . chapter 2
The bone is good but the skin could use some improving. You need more description and exciting words. Just try improving
| SMARTCUTEFUNNYXD 1/17/10 . chapter 2
um kinda short... okay, i guess... good story but really short and not written in the best way...
| Sem 11/16/09 . chapter 2
HEy i really loved your first 2 chapters Brillant please keep writing it looks like it would make an awesome book i wanna know what happens next xoxo
| let-darkness-come 6/30/09 . chapter 2
it was good but i think its just a little played out and is't a little soon for revenge with the new girl i mean its her first day and all
| Edward cullen is my hero 6/14/09 . chapter 2
Please update as soon as possible.
Read mine too please!
| My-School-Stories 6/4/09 . chapter 1
Hey this story was great :) but you did a mistake
at the part where it says
"Its Katie, not Kathy, and I heard you say I look as nice as a dumpster diver," I replied.
I think its meant to be the other way around because the popular girl called her katie (which is probably the wrong name) and Kathy's correcting nothing.
| Bubbles54 4/11/09 . chapter 1
Hey :) great start for a story.
In the second last paragraph. . . Is her name kathy or katie?
U might wanna fix that x