can't wait to read the rest :) !

The bone is good but the skin could use some improving. You need more description and exciting words. Just try improving

um kinda short... okay, i guess... good story but really short and not written in the best way...

HEy i really loved your first 2 chapters Brillant please keep writing it looks like it would make an awesome book i wanna know what happens next xoxo

it was good but i think its just a little played out and is't a little soon for revenge with the new girl i mean its her first day and all

Please update as soon as possible.

Read mine too please!

Amanda ]

Hey this story was great :) but you did a mistake

at the part where it says

"Its Katie, not Kathy, and I heard you say I look as nice as a dumpster diver," I replied.

I think its meant to be the other way around because the popular girl called her katie (which is probably the wrong name) and Kathy's correcting nothing.

Hey :) great start for a story.

In the second last paragraph. . . Is her name kathy or katie?

U might wanna fix that x