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where the wind blows
2009-11-29 . chapter 13
WAY TO GO REMUS YOU TELL MOLLY! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA (sorry i am rather sugar high...)

good chapter, one question? is this a slash with sirius and remus? i have no real problem with that... but i think you should make it clear what u want it to be. anyway good chapter can't wait to find out what happens!

~where the wind blows
DXRULES103
2009-11-28 . chapter 13
Whoa, enough said. Whoa. I love it. Yay for Remus telling Molly how it is! Although I still love her!
mountainelements
2009-11-28 . chapter 13
Wow. I hadn't thought about whether or not Sirius could adopt Harry even if his innocence was proven. I had also wondered why Lucius was so obsessed with Sirius before. Thanks for letting us readers know. I hope that Sirius and Remus are ok. It looked like Lucius had planned a way to get them in trouble during the full moon. I liked Remus's speech to Molly. She needs to understand that Harry is the opposite of her kids. Her kids know that they need to speak up and are completely willing to express their feelings while Harry just keeps everything inside.
owlviennagreen
2009-11-28 . chapter 13
meine liebe ich glaube ich beginne jedes review mit dem selben satz, aber es war wie immer fantastisch, ein genuss es zu lesen. ich bewundere autoren wie du, die es immer wieder schaffen die leute zu fesseln und die geschichte so zu schreiben, dass man das gefühl wirklich dabei zu sein.

mir hat die szene mit malfoy am besten gefallen. ich weiß nicht warum, aber es ist so. der arme sirius. die hand wird verbrannt und niemand kümmert sich darum. nur das mit dem "brechen" würde ich sagen ist bereits geschehen. zwar war es nicht malfoy selber, oder sagen wir nicht allein, aber sirius wurde gebrochen. seine jugend, das gefängnis haben ihn gebrochen.

zu all dem stress mit der verhandlung kommt nun auch noch die adoption dazu. ich bin gespannt wie er darauf reagieren wird. ich würde remus jeden falls raten sirius etwas zu sagen. das letzte mal ist auch nicht so gut ausgegangen als sie das mit peters tod verschwiegen haben.

was soll ich zu harry sagen. süß wie immer. wie kindlich und doch so passend zu glauben das alles gut wird, wenn er seine aussage macht. beide, sirius und harry werden durch so viel gefühlschaos durchgeboxt.

besondes gut gefällt mir die freundschaft mit ron, sie wächst immer mehr. das gefällt mir. ich hoffe wieder ganz blad von dir zu hören. ich hoffe wir bekommen noch ganz viele kapiteln zu lesen.

also einen schönen sonntag

owlviennagreen
Alexandros Black
2009-11-28 . chapter 13
Very beautiful and compassionate. I did cry a few times. Thank you so much:)
Leolina
2009-11-28 . chapter 13
I'm not crying! What a success, usually I sob like a toddler, but this time I'm far too touched to cry! Great Sirius, great Remus (gosh, he's wonderful when he shows his emotions), and, most of all, great RONNIE! DEar, he's so cute...and so much like the "real" one in the books!
Looking forward to an new chapter!
BloOm
2009-11-28 . chapter 13
I just loved the flashback =D I can only imagine Sirius at that age - Fanstastic :D the little rebel he was ^^
"The boy took a step forwards, his face expressionless. ''No, father. It was in 1631,'' he said and his voice sounded much too adult for such a small child." =D =D LOL

I laughed so hard !! So funny =D I could just imagine the scene !

But I have a problem with Molly I think ! She gets on my nerves ! She CANNOT adopt Harry ! She can't ! Harry "belongs with" Sirius, and no one else :'(
And I hate to see Sirius and Remus fight :s I can't wait for all this "trial business" to end... Can't wait for the next chapter, Harry'll give his testimony :-) We'll see how this goes... I hope Umbitch ^^ won't twist his every words :s

Take care, honey !
And update soon :p I couldn't not say it =D hihi

Bisous !!
AnimeObsessedGirl
2009-11-28 . chapter 13
Yay for new chapters! Yay for the inspiration to keep me form going insane from homework I keep forgeting about!

It would be so strange to go from living in a house with not that many people, not even talking or socializing with them, to going in a house with many children who ask a lot of questions... I mean I live with my parents and a little sister and that's enough for me... I think what if we had an exchange student for a whole year like my friend, or what of we took in other relatives all the time like some family of ours that live like and hour away... I don't think I would handle it very well at all... I have even stated to my mom that I would never be able to handle two extra people in our house for long periods of time, maybe one person for a while but exspecially during the school year is pushing it...
So for Harry to go from a place where his our thoughts and opinions don't even matter to a house where everyone whants to know everything about him and everything that goes on must be difficult. I apluad him for handling it so well for I would have gone crazy!

Mrs.Weasley wanting to adopt him probably really make his head spin... He does seem to like her and the others, but certainly like Sirius more. The problem is he is such a sweet boy he wouldn’t want to actually tell them that... It would be so difficult to explain his connection with Sirius to Molly. I understand a bit his emotions when he was angry at the girl in the movie... She wanted to meet her mother didn’t she? And then she just gives it all up... If she met her birth mother that doesn’t mean her adoptive parents wouldn’t be her family. They would really still be her true family because they are the ones who helped her become who she is. In a way Sirius really is the one who first adopted Harry. He gave Harry opportunities. He opened doors to situations that will help form who he is... I do understand his fears about having to leave Sirius forever if the Weasleys adopts him... In his mind he might be thinking about how he should be grateful they took him, and I’m sure the main thing would be that they are better than the Dursleys. Yet there would be emptiness because they aren’t Sirius.

I do feel rather sad for Remus too... I mean they is all that tension from his broken relationship with Sirius and Harry. Also if Sirius is executed, and the Weasleys do adopt Harry how would he feel? He might feel guilty for Sirius’ death, but also guilty for Harry’s sadness. He really had been through so much, he really deserves much more...

Now on to Lucius... wait... nope still hate him =)
the only respectable thing I can find about him is his love for his son...


Well another great chapter to make my day a little brighter... Even though my English teacher, coughNUTJOBcough coughTOOcoughOLDcoughTOcoughBEcoughtTEACHINGcoughcought, will just come and and and and, well I can’t say rain on my parade because I rather like rain... Well he’ll just make me stress... But the story does always make me feel more calm and relaxed. =)
Wandering Hitokiri
2009-11-27 . chapter 13
To: The Ministry of Magic
From: Anna Hatcher

I wish to politely inform the Ministry of the abuse of power by one Lucius Malfoy, and request that it be dealt with immediately. It is insulting to those of us who wish to call ourselves witches and wizards that we may be lumped into the same category as the likes of Malfo, who uses threats and bribes to get his way.

Also, there is the fact that Mr. Malfoy had ulterior motives for his actions, as well as his previous history as a Death Eater. Keeping this in mind, I would think it prudent for Mr. Malfoy to not be in any position of power, seeing as he has a tendancy to abuse it. I sincerely hope that you take the appropriate steps to correct this glaring oversight.

Sincerely, Anna Hatcher
MissDonna
2009-11-27 . chapter 13
Damn Zaira...you've got me crying again!

I think I've told you this a million times - but I love, love, love your little Harry...I want him as my forth son right now so that I can take all his hurt and insecurity away. What a beautiful unassuming little boy. Harry and Ron's late night conversation was too cute and it was really good of Ron to let Harry know that he wanted him as a brother. My first tears dropped when Harry asked Ron if they could still be friends once he's back living with Sirius.

Remus and Sirius are really pulling at my heartstrings...I don't think I can take it anymore lol. I need Remus to forgive Sirius and I need Sirius to truly open up to Remus about what was really going on when he sent Sev his way that night. Heck, I need to know myself.

I'm so SAD after reading this chapter...please tell me you still believe in happy endings right? Because I honestly need to believe that everything will turn out good for these three soon :-)

About Lucius Malfoy...never would have imagined that I could hate him more than I already did, but this chapter just proved it. He was an evil child who grew up to be an evil man. If I could reach into these pages, I think I'd kill him myself lol.

Please update this fantastic story again soon.
jesusfreak100percent
2009-11-27 . chapter 13
Well, this chapter certainly revealed some things we didn't know before. It wasn't action-packed, true, but it was still interesting. And now I want to see who's at the door. >.<

Update ASAP! :D Thanks
Martionmanswife
2009-11-27 . chapter 13
cliffie? evil. so next we get the hearing to finally be over and Sirius to go home.
TopazledHannah-kun
2009-11-27 . chapter 13
... You know, I really really really hate you for your cliffhangers. But that's what makes the story so good, they're well placed and the chapters aren't too short. It's like, "Yes! We're going and we're getting plot done and DAMN IT! CHAPTER END! WHAT?! [insert mini fit here]" And therefore, we come scrambling back next time you release a chapter.

Yea, Anyway, absolutely loving the story, it's a sequel worthy of the original, and most sequels should burn and die in my opinion. The scenes with Harry and Sirius melt my heart every time, and Harry is just so cuddly. I can't wait to see Harry testify, it's bound to be an excellent scene.

Your timing for uploading this couldn't have been better. I was just going through my bookmarked fics yesterday, and I still have The Promise there, and I was wondering when you would update again. So, love the timing, and the fic is excellent as always.

^^ I look forward to the next chapter, whenever it is uploaded.
~THK
HebHibHob
2009-11-27 . chapter 13
Oh, the angst! So much wonderfully well written angst! I like it nearly as much as I like chocolate, and that says a lot!

I really like a good story that makes you feel like your stomach is about to tear it self apart - but not in a bad way. And that's what this chapter made me feel. The Harry-Ron moment, and those finale sentences had me teary-eyed and sniffling. Absolutely brilliant. And Im once again stunned by your SuperDupaEvil!Lucius, he's very cannon.
I really can't wait to see how you have in store for us!
Until next chapter

with love// H.
Goldenfightergirl
2009-11-27 . chapter 13
aw dang I hate Lucius can't he die yet?
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