"Look, you knew right from the start that we couldn't get involved with anybody. It would just be too big of a risk," Logic said.

THEN TELL HER THAT.

God damn, angst is stupid.

It was really cute :) u should continue!

Kelly: *sniff* I-i'm crying!

Cooky: *pats her back* It's okay... Don't be sad.

Kelly: *lifts head up* GRRRR! I'M GONNA KILL YOU EGGMAN! *runs toward his base*

Cooky&Darkness: 0_0... -_-;

This is good. I can appreciate a story like this but at the same time i like happy endings. But still really good job

wow that was really good X3

i personally prefer happy endings but u cant always have them, can you? u need a sad one once in a while.

i like :D

Yeah, I think I agree with Sword- '(

So sad, yet sweet that he doesn't want her hurt.

Another fantastic story! Keep it up D

SugarhogRose x

I'm with sword on this one. Angst is so sad; not a big fan. Well written though. Now, where was I? Oh yeah! -hugs pen- WAH!

hm its okay but i dont really like how sad poor amy is and also...SONICS LOGIC IS EVIL!

Excellent. I like the conflict that pesents itself.

Why don't you make a sequal? Where Sonic follows his heart one day? But don't make a cheesy middle where 'Eggman's robotic hand came out and grabbed Amy' , Those are getting old... -_-'

Idea? Great!

Story? ... Not so great...

Hey I liked the way this turned out. It's a cool story and you ended it in a good way actually.

Nice!

ANOTHER GREAT STORY BY PEN VS SWORD :D

Angisty... but I like it...

But it was so sad I almost cried this story was emotional and I feel just like Sword who may be crying his butt of now... Don't worry sword I'm crying to but don't you think it is a good story? SO stop crying LOL

Your authors notes make me giggle :)

But the story made me sad.

*pats Amy on back* It's okay, he's a nub anyways!

Sonic: 'EY!

NUB!

This is good. Angsty, but good.

Wow, this was pretty good. I don't even know if I have any con. crit. (I'm just starting to use it.) But I think this is one of the best stories I've read today! Anyway, gotta go!

God bless,

Lauren Michelle Hedgehog