|Reviews for Breakdown|
| A Damn F00L 5/23/12 . chapter 1
"Look, you knew right from the start that we couldn't get involved with anybody. It would just be too big of a risk," Logic said.
THEN TELL HER THAT.
God damn, angst is stupid.
| Chips Dip 6/12/11 . chapter 1
It was really cute :) u should continue!
| InvaderMazda 5/15/11 . chapter 1
Kelly: *sniff* I-i'm crying!
Cooky: *pats her back* It's okay... Don't be sad.
Kelly: *lifts head up* GRRRR! I'M GONNA KILL YOU EGGMAN! *runs toward his base*
Cooky&Darkness: 0_0... -_-;
| Bluehorse14 12/9/10 . chapter 1
This is good. I can appreciate a story like this but at the same time i like happy endings. But still really good job
| 01SonAmy01 6/3/10 . chapter 1
wow that was really good X3
i personally prefer happy endings but u cant always have them, can you? u need a sad one once in a while.
i like :D
| SugarhogRose 4/11/10 . chapter 1
Yeah, I think I agree with Sword- '(
So sad, yet sweet that he doesn't want her hurt.
Another fantastic story! Keep it up D
| Alyssacookie 11/28/09 . chapter 1
I'm with sword on this one. Angst is so sad; not a big fan. Well written though. Now, where was I? Oh yeah! -hugs pen- WAH!
| megaboy50 9/23/09 . chapter 1
hm its okay but i dont really like how sad poor amy is and also...SONICS LOGIC IS EVIL!
| Cataclyptic 8/28/09 . chapter 1
Excellent. I like the conflict that pesents itself.
| SonicROX1998 7/22/09 . chapter 1
Why don't you make a sequal? Where Sonic follows his heart one day? But don't make a cheesy middle where 'Eggman's robotic hand came out and grabbed Amy' , Those are getting old... -_-'
| Tempest of Reach 4/23/09 . chapter 1
Story? ... Not so great...
| RaeRaethehedgehog 4/19/09 . chapter 1
Hey I liked the way this turned out. It's a cool story and you ended it in a good way actually.
| Timeless Eclipse 4/12/09 . chapter 1
ANOTHER GREAT STORY BY PEN VS SWORD :D
Angisty... but I like it...
But it was so sad I almost cried this story was emotional and I feel just like Sword who may be crying his butt of now... Don't worry sword I'm crying to but don't you think it is a good story? SO stop crying LOL
| HisSweetestHoney 4/11/09 . chapter 1
Your authors notes make me giggle :)
But the story made me sad.
*pats Amy on back* It's okay, he's a nub anyways!
This is good. Angsty, but good.
| Maionaise 4/11/09 . chapter 1
Wow, this was pretty good. I don't even know if I have any con. crit. (I'm just starting to use it.) But I think this is one of the best stories I've read today! Anyway, gotta go!
Lauren Michelle Hedgehog