When is next update? I find this a very good story, the flashbacks are integrated very good. I look forward to more of this.

Dang it! When's the next chapter!

This Is So Good!

I just hope that Friend comes back and not end tragically fighting foes as it may happen soon, as it seems some nasty surprises may come from Old Caprica, as the Rebel Basestar was filled with violent intent, and they had over 150.0 years and all the infrastructure of the Old Colonies to build their civilization.

Given the nature of what they had though they might not have gone too far...unlike Red Stripes who were trully sentient and had a long time to evolve their technology and society, as well as spread their civilization across the stars. Maybe they took the road of creating a vast space based civilization, as they did not need to fix on any given planet. They could have become true Space Colonists, inhabiting the space between the stars, a vast and powerful true space faring civilization, thousands of years ahead of Earth...

I hope for a good end this time for humans. The original end for the Galactica series is a bittersweet one, where all their strugle to keep their civilization was ultimately lost. Here there is a chance to see that not wasted like in the series, where that past would be kept,and a true alliance with humanity's children would come forth, creating a powerful civilization this time ready to spread through the Galaxy...maybe joining the more mature species out there...

Great story, really well developed plot and very good flow and continuity. The back and forth scheme is a nice one, something I also use on my own stories, and masterfully used here.

Congratulations in both style and plot development, as well as a Big Congratulation for the whole concept.

Keep Going and I hope to see an update soon


(And I hope the story has a good ending...so much bittersweet or tragic ones already out there...it is always nice to see something with Hope and Grace moving forward )

Awaiting Eagerly the next Chapter


Voidhawk out

Hm - I don't really get the plot. It is more like a patchwork. Still it is a nice read.

Chapter 9 is ending with some super-secret government research project - OK but den't get too much into this paranoid conspiracy stuff. "Men in Black" pre-empted that.

I looking forward to see what happens.

What that bit of the Galactica doing on the Moon? Good Job! I hope chapter 10 well come soon, but take all the time you need.

The military? Not good...poor Laura...I know her well...

Good job, keep it up.

I like Friend, let all hope they do not "start the ancient cycle among themselves", that all we need.(but I think that they well)

There was so mach that I like about this chapter, from "I am Friend"(now that is a good first truly independent thought to have) to the Red Stripe Society. The Odysseus/Zoe thing just feels like it shod be. Were are you going with the Smithsonian?

Love what you did with Baltar. I hope the Centurions OK?(why do I see them becomeing a new '5'?)

We are going to do it all over agen are we not?

O yes, they'd laughed at their elevation to Godhood!lol But I can see it being so.

But as The Breeze sad, "it's utterly heartbreaking that they could keep the story alive" for so long and then just lose it.

Who was it in 1300 BC? I'd not think that the memories well last 140,0+ years? But if some of then can project then why not? Well we all know “All of this has happened before, all of this will happen again... again... again...”

OK Batman. To the Bat Cave. We've got a mystery to solve and lives to protect. Where are the hidden sliding doors and roving picture frame eyes? Sorry. Couldn't help but make fun. Won't happen again. It seems life is coming full circle(like it always does). Life found here began out there which came from here and so on and so forth again and again. Whoa. Slow down. I'm getting dizzy. I like that you threw in the Apollo mission to gather what Galactica dropped on the moon. Nice touch. Can't wait to read more. Update soon. Thanks:)

good chapter- look forward to reading more-

Everyone loves super secret things. Especially in basements.